Overwhelming? How much more than whelming would that be exactly?

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deborah grabien - Nov 14, 2003 8:30:09 am PST #2722 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

OK, there's something - damn. I can't analyse; I refuse.

But I can try this, Erin, and please tell me sod off and shut the fuck up if not?

But I don't want to shelter you.
I want to watch you seek, and crash and burn

and rise.

Because that way?

I don't have to.

(There's just something - something in the pauses, or the breaths.)


Strix - Nov 14, 2003 8:36:38 am PST #2723 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

No, no. No sodding off, here.

I pondered (god, how pretentious!) the crash and burn line, too.

I do like the irony in dropping, the "rise" line - that's good.

Hrm.


Betsy HP - Nov 14, 2003 9:18:12 am PST #2724 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

A friendly person over at NaNoWrimo gave me this link:

[link]


Deena - Nov 14, 2003 9:22:43 am PST #2725 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Deb, I did a review, but it wouldn't let me say what should be purchased with it. Right now it recommends Sunshine, which isn't really a bad choice, though not thematic or even similar in style. I did like them both. Fewer narrative problems in Weaver, though.


Strix - Nov 14, 2003 9:27:28 am PST #2726 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Ooh, hopping to read review. I am now an Author!Geek!


sfmarty - Nov 14, 2003 12:00:28 pm PST #2727 of 10001
Who? moi??

Good reference, Betsy. I only read the link page, but it seemed very good to me.


Beverly - Nov 14, 2003 7:36:13 pm PST #2728 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Deena, I may have missed a step. Your review is up but mine isn't--and it didn't offer me the options of books to choose with Weaver. Did I do something wrong?

Should I go back to Amazon and try to post it again, you think?


Deena - Nov 14, 2003 7:43:21 pm PST #2729 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Beverly, if mine is up, that's new. They take a bit to review it, and they didn't offer me the opportunity of suggesting something to go with it either, so everything's probably fine.


Beverly - Nov 14, 2003 7:54:42 pm PST #2730 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Okay, I may have stuck my foot in it, because I posted it again. Oh well. We'll see what transpires.


Deena - Nov 14, 2003 8:17:19 pm PST #2731 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

I think, if you post it twice, they just delete the second one. I have to go read the review. Did you like it? I wasn't sure if I was saying enough -- they kill any review that they think tells too much.

Ah, I'm slow, but I'm stubborn. When you look on the full information page for Weaver, there's a spot somewhere in the middle of the page that says, I recommend this: and a blank for the ISDN number instead of/in addition to this book. You enter the ISDN number and click the radio button of your choice (though 'in addition to' seems to be the default).

I recommended 'in addition to' Gaiman's Neverwhere and Terry Windling's Woodwife hoping that readers who like them will pick it up. I would.