I-I'm just taking things without paying for th... In what twisted dictionary is that stealing?

Willow ,'Showtime'


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Am-Chau Yarkona - Nov 13, 2002 3:34:08 am PST #236 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

Trying to write poetry about the internet is probably a mistake, but I'd be intrested to know what you lot think oF this attempt. And any ideas for a title?

Shouting in the ether
You are only what you make
What you type
is what you are
pictures from the screen-words
reality ignored

reality ignored
the screen-word’s pictures
are what you are
Defining you
made by what you make
Echoes through the ether.


erikaj - Nov 13, 2002 6:39:27 am PST #237 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Interesting thought. But do you think we ignore reality or just shape it to our own benefit?(Not that I'm arguing with your poem.)


Am-Chau Yarkona - Nov 13, 2002 6:47:58 am PST #238 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

'bend' doesn't have the same stresses as 'ignore'. It wouldn't work in the poem, even if it is truer, which I don't intend arguing over. The point is that you could be ignoring it, and that would be bad. Maybe. Am I making any sense?


Steph L. - Nov 13, 2002 7:05:21 am PST #239 of 10001
Unusually and exceedingly peculiar and altogether quite impossible to describe

"u r to b 4 me 4ever"

I blame Prince and text messaging.

::snerk:: I blame Prince for a lot.


erikaj - Nov 13, 2002 7:07:26 am PST #240 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Well, yeah, sure. Just thinking out loud. I've been known to talk to televisions, too.Your poem made me think,though.


erikaj - Nov 13, 2002 7:08:23 am PST #241 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

funky x-post, but funny. Bwah.


Am-Chau Yarkona - Nov 13, 2002 7:21:45 am PST #242 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

Your poem made me think,though.

Thinking is good.


sumi - Nov 13, 2002 7:51:10 am PST #243 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

Hec, you don't blame Sly Stone?


DavidS - Nov 13, 2002 10:07:18 am PST #244 of 10001
"Look, son, if it's good enough for Shirley Bassey, it's good enough for you."

Hec, you don't blame Sly Stone?

Well, he misspelled ("be mice elf") but he didn't do the "U" "4" thing that Prince did.

Also, Sly & the Family Stone is on my short list of Greatest Bands Ever and it'd seem churlish to blame him when he's had a talent-destroying addiction for the last 30 years.


erikaj - Nov 13, 2002 10:11:27 am PST #245 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

So, essentially he is harder on himself than you could ever be? Yes, I am making light of another's tragedy. Are we surprised now?