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deborah grabien - Oct 13, 2003 8:38:45 pm PDT #2192 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Yup, the clues are there.

It does need another pass - I actually think the opening is a bit too abrupt, but only by about a paragraph or so of intro. The tighter version is much better. I'll down down and do some more tomorrow, in between Matty and TET bits, and whatever else the universe throws my way.

BTW, on a memememe note, crossposted in Bitches:

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Nilly - Oct 14, 2003 12:30:28 am PDT #2193 of 10001
Swouncing

Oh, Deb, it's so right! The color and the contrast with the brighter color on the bottom, and the picture and the turn-the-page look of it. I think the story is going to be very happy living behind that. IIRC, you were talking about having some sort of music-sheet element in it, right?

Anne W. - Oct 14, 2003 12:32:23 am PDT #2194 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Wowza! That's a beautiful cover, Deb. I can't wait to read Weaver. Also, congratulations on the WalMart sales.

Question: IIRC, Matty Groves is the third book in the series. What's the title of the second?

Nilly - Oct 14, 2003 12:36:30 am PDT #2195 of 10001
Swouncing

Anne, "The Famous Flower of Serving Men".

Anne W. - Oct 14, 2003 12:40:42 am PDT #2196 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Thanks, Nilly!

Beverly - Oct 14, 2003 4:56:42 am PDT #2197 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Deb, that's a lovely cover. And congratulations on WalMart!

Trudy Booth - Oct 14, 2003 5:50:20 am PDT #2198 of 10001
Greece's financial crisis threatens to take down all of Western civilization - a civilization they themselves founded. A rather tragic irony - which is something they also invented. - Jon Stewart

Deb, it's lovely.

Go on Oprah if it will get you the villa. Bite your lip and go on Oprah.

erikaj - Oct 14, 2003 8:39:35 am PDT #2199 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

If you do, I'll tell everyone I know and be all " She's much dirtier in...well, not in person, exactly. But I know her. Sort of."

deborah grabien - Oct 14, 2003 8:48:30 am PDT #2200 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Going to post this in in Beep Me, as well. But, from my editor this morning (the first part refers to cherry steusel, and Dan is her PA):

I should have told you, but I was at home, without my e-mail addresses. Yes they arrived in fine condition and were absolutely delicious, considering their trip, but if you keep mailing things across the continent you'll use up your whole enormous advance. Thanks very much for them, which I shared with my family, lucky dogs. Maybe next time I'll eat it all myself. Which reminds me, when I come back from B-con I will call your agent and arrange to buy Serving Man. It looks to me like the series is going to go well. Very well. (Dan loves the book, too; he's just read Weaver so far.)

She shoots! She scores!

If I can find a cheap flight or talk Nic into a horrible drive, and Ruth has any time free, I may just blow the popstand and head down to Vegas.

Astarte - Oct 14, 2003 8:49:45 am PDT #2201 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

Yesssssss!!!

Go, Team Series!!!

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