No. And yes. It's always sudden.

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Susan W. - Sep 21, 2003 8:13:44 pm PDT #1966 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Maybe I'll just not specify a type of tree and trust my readers to just believe me when I say she's got twigs in her hair and bits of bark and/or sap all over the back of her habit. (It's all to make sure she's looking really, thoroughly disreputable and disheveled when they walk out of the woods and realize they're not quite as alone as they thought, being as Lucy's bitchy cousin saw their horses tethered at the edge of the copse and was curious enough to investigate.)


deborah grabien - Sep 21, 2003 8:15:07 pm PDT #1967 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

(giggling)

Oh, my. Sap?


Susan W. - Sep 21, 2003 8:15:50 pm PDT #1968 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

erika, your eye for the telling detail reminds me of Clyde Edgerton, who's one of my favorites largely because he can nail a sense of place or character with one pithy, gently biting phrase.


Susan W. - Sep 21, 2003 8:22:12 pm PDT #1969 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Oh, my. Sap?

If sap can be had--too bad they're not in the state of my birth, though I don't think any amount of passion would make me stupid enough to have sex against a loblolly pine.

But yeah, I'm trying to make it good and obvious what a nice little abandoned romp in the woods Our Heroine has been having, so it'll be a sufficient comedown from the sublime heights of sexual ecstasy to realize the bitch cousin all but witnessed it.


deborah grabien - Sep 21, 2003 8:40:10 pm PDT #1970 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

It almost makes me wish Lucy was mean enough to mentally go "HA-ha! In your face, coz!"


Susan W. - Sep 21, 2003 8:44:52 pm PDT #1971 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

A few days later she more or less does, and not just mentally. Bitchy cousin is just married to an aging, rather stupid earl who badly needs an heir, and is miserably regretting it, and really quite jealous of Lucy. The cousins meet accidentally, bitchy cousin tries to twit Lucy for her common behavior, but Lucy realizes she no longer needs to fear her as she did when they were growing up, and says something like, "It appears to me that we have each made our beds, and now all that's left for us is to lie in them. I bid you a good day, my lady."

That was a very fun scene to write.


deborah grabien - Sep 21, 2003 8:50:45 pm PDT #1972 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

"...and some beds are far more pleasant than others..."


victor infante - Sep 21, 2003 8:52:31 pm PDT #1973 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Hey, Deb. You ever sign/read at a store in San Diego called "Mysterious Galaxy?" I think you'd go over well, if you're still looking at places to sign. (And of course, my saying 'you need to sign in Worcester' can just be read as understood. :)

Also, newest part of Nihilist Chic is up, in which more unfortunate things happen to our heroine. And Cooter's back!

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deborah grabien - Sep 21, 2003 8:56:13 pm PDT #1974 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Gronk. Victor, me for more Chic in the morning. I just realised that I'm so tired, I literally can't open my mouth wide enough to yawn properly.

There is ice cream and meds, followed by a loud kerthunk! in my immediate future....

San Diego? I like this idea....


Am-Chau Yarkona - Sep 21, 2003 10:08:26 pm PDT #1975 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

I think birch is a New World tree, but you could search and see if it and/or the myrtle had been imported to England by the date of your story.

Some kinds of birch are New World, but silver birch goes back here to before the Romans arrived, I'm fairly confident. That would leave curls of white bark on her back and probably in her hair as well. Um... otherwise, oak is classic, and in a damp woodland one side (the sunnier side) sometimes gets covered in a kind of green lichen or algae (I don't know what it is; I just know that if you lean on it, it leaves bright green smears down your back). Does any of that help?