Could you have her spot herself in a mirror and wonder briefly who that lovely woman is?
Travers: Perhaps you'll favor us with a demonstration while we're here. Buffy: You mean, like, right now? 'Cause, already had my recommended daily dose of fights tonight.
'Potential'
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Connie Neil - May 23, 2003 8:23:06 pm PDT #1388 of 10001
brillig
Betsy HP - May 23, 2003 10:04:04 pm PDT #1389 of 10001
If I only had a brain...
That's a fearsome cliché, IMHO IMHO IMHO.
Holli - May 23, 2003 10:05:42 pm PDT #1390 of 10001
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore
Could someone else spot her in a mirror and wonder briefly who that lovely woman is?
Susan W. - May 23, 2003 10:30:45 pm PDT #1391 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Could someone else spot her in a mirror and wonder briefly who that lovely woman is?
Not really--I'm writing in the heroine's first-person POV.
I think I can get by with a mirror only while she's upstairs getting ready, because of course she'll be looking in one then. And I can have her note a few cogent details that seem different, but not describe herself from head-to-toe, because it's not like she's forgotten she's 5'0" with brown hair and eyes and needs to look at the mirror and remind herself.
Anne W. - May 24, 2003 4:29:42 am PDT #1392 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
it's not like she's forgotten she's 5'0" with brown hair and eyes and needs to look at the mirror and remind herself.
snerk! It's funny because it's true! t /Homer
deborah grabien - May 24, 2003 11:34:33 am PDT #1393 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
I am as one with Betsy. Besides, isn't the point that she sees him really see her?
Erin G. - Jun 11, 2003 12:24:59 pm PDT #1394 of 10001
Average everyday sane/psycho supergoddess
hey, now that the Phoenix is back, I'm ready to see if anyone wants to read the first part of my book in progress. It's raw and I haven't made the edits to the MS I have made to my hard copy of it (I have to edit on paper, it's a thing.)
I've gotten a few takers and they are much appreciated, but working in a vaccuum, you know -- the more feedback, the better.
Let me know! It's about 25 pages thus far.
Susan W. - Jun 11, 2003 12:29:00 pm PDT #1395 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
What kind of book is it, Erin?
deborah grabien - Jun 11, 2003 2:25:03 pm PDT #1396 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Erin, send it along. Happy to early-beta.
Erin G. - Jun 11, 2003 8:38:32 pm PDT #1397 of 10001
Average everyday sane/psycho supergoddess
Susan, basically it's a fantasy, set in real time, only with a slightly skewed alternate reality (that could be real) in which supernatural creatures exist. God, does THAT sound familiar! But I'm trying to pull in some creatures that haven't been done to death, and I'm playing with the Lilith legend.
Research has been pretty fun, but I was agonizing for about a month of "How am I going to pull in all of the Hewbrew midrash and Babylonian stuff and create a true to legend world structure?"
Then I remembered the whole "Duh, I'm writing this and I'll skew the myths as I wish" part of poetic license, and research was a lot more fun after that.
And Deb, thank you! Insent.