Just want to say that Fay's P'thology story is lovely and grand.
I wanna read it.
Lorne: You know what they say about people who need people. Connor: They're the luckiest people in the world. Lorne: You been sneaking peeks at my Streisand collection again, Kiddo? Connor: Just kinda popped out.
'Time Bomb'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
deborah grabien - Mar 28, 2003 8:01:31 pm PST #1093 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Rebecca Lizard - Mar 28, 2003 8:11:26 pm PST #1094 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
Hie thyself to the right thread, pretty lady.
deborah grabien - Mar 28, 2003 8:18:19 pm PST #1095 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Hotay....
deborah grabien - Mar 29, 2003 10:33:24 pm PST #1096 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Beaucoup thanks to everyone who beta-read and commented on my bit of flash-fiction. Lifesavers, one and all.
Susan W. - Mar 30, 2003 7:34:28 pm PST #1097 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Deb, Ms. Havisham, are y'all still up for critiquing my first attempt at a sex scene? It's about 2800 words, 9 1/2 double-spaced pages. (I'll take other volunteers, too, if anyone is interested.)
I'm leaving for the ice rink in about fifteen minutes, so unless y'all are around right this very minute, I'll be actually sending it later this evening.
erikaj - Mar 30, 2003 7:51:30 pm PST #1098 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
I'll take a look, if you want.
deborah grabien - Mar 30, 2003 8:17:40 pm PST #1099 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Susan, I'm here and at home (baking savarin for Steph, in fact), so send to my profile addy whenever you wish, m'dear.
Ms. Havisham - Mar 30, 2003 8:33:00 pm PST #1100 of 10001
And we will call it... "This Land."
Sure, Susan, I think I have time. Profile addy's good.
Steph L. - Mar 30, 2003 8:58:50 pm PST #1101 of 10001
Unusually and exceedingly peculiar and altogether quite impossible to describe
(baking savarin for Steph, in fact)
t happy dance
Ms. Havisham - Mar 30, 2003 9:52:40 pm PST #1102 of 10001
And we will call it... "This Land."
All right, I'll be brave right before I go to bed so I won't be hitting "Read New" for hours hoping somebody responded.
Summary: The courier's first law is "Don't open the package." Unfortunately, Lena isn't a courier.
I originally wrote "Deliberate Breath" as porn, glorious porn, but there was a serious science fiction story struggling to get out. So I'm reworking it, and I'd love to have some fresh eyeballs on it.
Warning up front: Rated M for mature due to swearing, violence, and lingering sex. I don't pull punches on scenes. And it's science fiction.
Not everybody's cup of tea, so I'll post the first page and a half or so as a teaser.