Looks great to me.
A ghost? What's the deal? Is every frat on this campus haunted? And if so, why do people keep coming to these parties, cause it's not the snacks.
Xander ,'Dirty Girls'
The Minearverse 5: Closer to the Earth, Further from the Ax
[NAFDA] "There will be an occasional happy, so that it might be crushed under the boot of the writer." From Zorro to Angel (including Wonderfalls, The Inside and Drive), this is where Buffistas come to anoint themselves in the bloodbath.
Polter-Cow - Dec 17, 2007 6:42:43 pm PST #9103 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
Pix - Dec 17, 2007 6:43:21 pm PST #9104 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
Allyson, it's clear and persuasive. Excellent job, my friend.
Ginger - Dec 17, 2007 7:05:36 pm PST #9105 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
It sounds great, Allyson.
Liese S. - Dec 17, 2007 7:12:53 pm PST #9106 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."
Nicely done, Allyson.
And gotcha. I'm pretty much right there with you with how you're feeling, so more power to you.
§ ita § - Dec 17, 2007 7:24:53 pm PST #9107 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
Well played, Ms. Beatrice, well played. Did you suggest CFerg lean on people? He might be able to prod to action, and if tells John Rogers that he knows you it might grease that very wheel.
Allyson - Dec 17, 2007 7:26:07 pm PST #9108 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
I never got his email addie. I haven't got any writer responses, which make me nervous.
§ ita § - Dec 17, 2007 7:35:23 pm PST #9109 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
You didn't get Colin's address? I know I sent it. As for John's, it's on his blog: kfmonkey(nospam)@gmail.com
Beverly - Dec 17, 2007 8:44:24 pm PST #9110 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Allyson, the piece is awesome, clear and to the point, but with wry. Or on wry. Whichever. My point is, that while I love the Below the Line and its acronym, I think a lot of people need to know what that "line" is. You sort of spelled it out, but a pointer (pssst. This is the "line") might help clarify, for those of us cursed to be non-linear.
Also--can we link to that page on our LJ, or pimp it to fan communities? I know of a couple headed by less-craxy-than-some people that might love to collect to kick in.
Kristen - Dec 17, 2007 8:52:58 pm PST #9111 of 10001
Beverly, there will probably be an actual website you can link to in the morning. (Hopefully.) I'm working on it right now.
Beverly - Dec 17, 2007 9:09:31 pm PST #9112 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Thanks, Kristen.