I didn't notice any extra hyphens. I'm a hyphenating kind of girl, though.
Adverbs before adjectives don't need hyphens; they modify that adjective WITHOUT the help of punctuation, dammit! There was also a lot of yelling about semicolons. And the occasional content feedback. But mostly spelling and punctuation.
It really came at a time when the only thing that could have distracted me was a book of that turn-the-page caliber.
Aw, yay.
Also, P-C, can you send me her address? I've been remiss in thanking her, but things have been kind of fuzzy in my brain.
Insent.
With regards to your points: I think the cloning thing is crazy super expensive, and I don't think anyone outside the CDC knows about it, which is why the rich aren't just sitting around with new bodies ready to go. Obvs you have to handwave cloning in general, but my favorite thing about the way she handled it was that Georgia II was very clearly Georgia II. I liked the fact that she was Georgia and she wasn't; she had her identity as a clone.
I do agree about the wrap-up at the end, though. I'll see how I feel about it when I read it now, but it did go a little quickly, and it was hard to believe that the CDC (and the world in general) would go along with such atrocities. But I think it does also continue to tie in to the themes of fear as a method of control brought up in the first book. It's a devious, conniving, horrible plan, on a grand, global scale, and I do think that's cool, if, you know, terrible for humanity.
P.S. I yelled at her about Becks. Noooooooooo.