Sure, Snacky! Honored, and all that.
(Although I had to scroll back up to see the context of that. Hmmm.)
'Serenity'
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Sure, Snacky! Honored, and all that.
(Although I had to scroll back up to see the context of that. Hmmm.)
It's an easy fix, really. Not "every muscled thigh" but "each muscled thigh." That would make it slightly purple prose, but not leave the reader with the impression that you have to count the thighs.
Another easy fix could be "every muscle of his thighs" or "every thigh muscle."
WEEPING with laughter here. And filled with an unholy urge to read the fic in question, thighs and all. Gosh.
Meanwhile, does anyone know anything about A Forfeit of Dreams, KL Morgan's sequel to 'Labyrinth'? I've been enjoying it tremendously, spreading it out over several days rather than wolfing it all down at once, and suddenly 2 of the bloody chapters vanish! Argh! Argh! Argh!
If anyone knows of another location where it might be found, do tell. Those of you who've never heard of it but enjoyed the David Bowie goblin king movie, do dip into it. It's great fun.
(Also? Ha! More AJ Hall converts! Excellent! Toaster sales continue to rise...)
Fay! Sweet lady! Did I tell you how much I adored and admired "Invisible to See"? I keep meaning to write you about it.
No chance of a followup for that, I imagine?
Jumping on the "Invisible to See" Fay love-train. You are amazing. Amazing, I tell you.
Advice for the ages:
“Spare of the moment decisions never fair well my friend.” Walter advised.
At least wait till you've got a strike. That's something you can really count on!
I've got a spare moment. Anyone need a decision?
Oof. Almighty hell, Fay woman, that fanfic's unfinished! Or, rather, the sequel is! What am I supposed to do now, without closure?
What's that you say? Feedback? Oh, that.
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...as the holidays are finally here, am presently getting started on the sequel to 'Invisible to See', to be called 'This Rough Magic'. Although I don't know that it will appeal to the Draco/Harry crowd, neccesarily, because I don't actually have a Draco/Harry OTP agenda, and I'm just as interested in what's going on with Snape, and Hermione, and Hagrid, and indeed my own Justin...