Huh. Just got some feedback on how I could fix the LFN story I just posted.
I mean, it's better than a mindless LoC, I guess...
I may be love's bitch, but at least I'm man enough to admit it.
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Fan Fiction: Writers, Readers, and Enablers
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Dana - Apr 18, 2003 8:02:28 am PDT #4980 of 10000
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.
§ ita § - Apr 18, 2003 8:03:24 am PDT #4981 of 10000
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
How? How?
Am-Chau Yarkona - Apr 18, 2003 8:03:48 am PDT #4982 of 10000
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
LoC
Eh? What? I feel very stupid, but I can't figure what this stands for.
askye - Apr 18, 2003 8:04:41 am PDT #4983 of 10000
Thrive to spite them
I keep meaning to send you feedback on that, I haven't seen LFN since...well I'm not sure when, never seen the end but I really loved your story. Now I wish I had kept up with the show.
Dana - Apr 18, 2003 8:05:47 am PDT #4984 of 10000
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.
LoC is letter of comment.
ita, as you might have guessed, there's a substantial amount of "Nikita would NEVER do that" comments, which have all been very polite and usually praise the writing. This e-mail suggested that I could go back and drop in hints about something being wrong with Nikita.
But see, I didn't want to do that. If I'd wanted to, I could have, but that wasn't the point.
Edit: Thanks, Allison. :-)
§ ita § - Apr 18, 2003 8:07:43 am PDT #4985 of 10000
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
that wasn't the point.
How would you know? You only wrote the damned thing!
You will notice I had nothing useful to say about it except "Yay!" for which I both do and do not apologise.
Micole - Apr 18, 2003 8:08:54 am PDT #4986 of 10000
I've been working on a song about the difference between analogy and metaphor.
I thought--and you realize I'm speaking from your story and not from having ever watched the show--that the point was [story spoiler]
there *wasn't* anything wrong with Nikita. Or at least, this was base-level Nikita, who'd rebelled against Section enough to try to humanize it and get rid of some of its more obviously awful practices, but who'd internalized its dictates enough that doing anything to make Section work right--including killing children--seemed an acceptable sacrifice for the greater good.
[edited because I clearly can't deal with singular collective nouns]
Dana - Apr 18, 2003 8:11:44 am PDT #4987 of 10000
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.
Oh, my god, I'm totally hiring Micole to follow me around and explain my stuff.
askye - Apr 18, 2003 8:12:26 am PDT #4988 of 10000
Thrive to spite them
Dana, I totally believe Nikita doing what she did though, it made sense to me. She tried to change Section into a 'nice' place, recruiting without taking kids like her and taking their lives away, but that was the method that worked. So she got desparate, afraid for her life.
Theodosia - Apr 18, 2003 8:12:48 am PDT #4989 of 10000
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"
Hey, if you pay her more money, maybe she'll proceed you into places, explain what you're going to say. Sort of like a herald.