whimper.
It's all those perishing ads they keep sending me promising to enlarge my penis.
(Considers penis mightier than the sword quippage. Thinks better of it.)
also? The Remus-giving-Snape-a-kitten thing? Oh, again, dear. But Snape-with-cat would be plausible - what
is
his familiar? Or does he not have one? But yes, it would have to be a very stroppy scratchy sleek butch bad-tempered black cat...
That was the problem. The whole story was just *this side* of plausible...but then it wasn't. And I had to read the whole thing, and shrift laughed at me.
Hagrid sounds, if anything, kind of Norse-ish. Definitely not Greek or Latin.
Hagrid sounds, if anything, kind of Norse-ish.
Definitely. I'm flashing on someone but I don't have my books with me.
Mmmmm. You know what's good? Feedback. So good.
Mmmmm. You know what's good? Feedback. So good.
Oh, yeah. What's better? Feedback from someone you specifically wondered what they thought of it...
You know what else is bad? Feedback that is badly spelled. Makes it hard to take the praise.
So today I finally had time to work on the story again. But I'm concerned that it's structurally flawed. Not porny enough. But I'll try to finish the draft before I give up on writing slash.
Burrell, there's a whole world of not-quite-porn, and then other realms of violence, evil and other plot topics. Call upon me if you need beta, or, you know, are feeling like you need to give out sneak peeks.