Yeah, umm. Taken directly from my before-I-knew-what-slash-was slashing.

I wish I still had copies of the stories, but that and the adventure where Piete of Pretty Piete's Pleasure Gel was kidnapped and they had to rescue him are all I can remember.

(Heh. Though I didn't even put Piete in sexual situations, it did swing a bit close to RPS.)(Piete was a friend of mine in High School. Only I didn't know him when I wrote the stories, I just liked the spelling of his name. However, he'd managed to read them before we met, and actually thought they were kind of funny, so no trouble did I get into.)

Hmm. I know sites for advice on how to write gay sex...

yes, I've seen that one, I think. I found it kind of eye-opening when I read it, but don't remember much now.

I don't know if Erika's looking for advice on writing gay sex, but let's have the links while you're at it, Dana.

(at it... oh dear, oh dear, oh dear. I am throughly corrupted.)

well, one never knows, if not now, it could come up again...

Minotaur's site.

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Then there's Macedon's site, which has nothing to do with sex, really, but is a must-read.

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In this place, things are forever moving on thier own and coming up again...

And by things, I mean GVSP. So, that's how to write gay sex, vampire sex, snuff sex and porny sex, please!

Vampire sex: Just shut up about his cold penis already. We. Get. It.

Wrod. Also kept quiet about his cold semen, his cold passage, and all other cold parts of him. Or her. 'cold' is not a hot word, and I wonder why people seem to miss that fact.

Does anybody know any good advice about writing sex scenes?

Few points of advice that work for me:

3. People should be anatomically correct and sexual positions physically possible. In cases such as these, research is your friend. (Or experience, but sometimes we can't experience what we're writing without certain sex-change operations.)

2. Unless the point is bad sex, your characters should be turned-on by each other. Shape of a wrist, turn of the head, noise in the back of the throat -- all those random, intimate things that make up sexual tension.

1. Make it visceral. Tactile. Smells, tastes, touches, sounds, the way things look.

When you've got all three of these, you should be able to write a sex scene that's hot without even being particularly explicit.