Xander ,'Chosen'
[NAFDA] Spike-centric discussion. Lusty, lewd (only occasionally crude), risque (and frisque), bawdy (Oh, lawdy!), flirty ('cuz we're purty), raunchy talk inside. Caveat lector.
I'd cut the "Unfortunately" at the beginning of the second paragraph. I don't know why, but I would.
I would also cut the "But" from
But, I decided to take the research assistant position because it is in my field of study and will give me hands-on experience that will likely help me in my education.
...at the end of the second paragraph.
It's a good letter though, vw. Just the right tone.
cereal...
I like amy's edit.
On second thought, I agree with Cindy about the "Unfortunately"
dueling "what she said"s!
Yeah, I was wishy-washy about the "Unfortunately," so I'll take that out.
Thanks guys!
some calm at the job ma would nice for today.
Hee. All together, now.
Lots of calm for askye.
Lots of calm job~ma for askye.
Calm, cool, collected job~ma to you, askye.
Much job-ma askye.