Mal: Then I call it a win. What's the problem? Inara: Should I start with the part where you're stranded in the middle of nowhere, or the part where you have no clothes?

'Trash'


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Typo Boy - Aug 09, 2005 8:39:01 am PDT #5489 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Also I think historical dialog is different than contemporary. Yorkshire dialect may still use "'thine" but I'll bet 21st Yorkshire dialect differs substantially from 18th century Yorkshire dialect.

And John Dickson Carr made a point in writing an introduction to one bit he set in the 18th century. I wish I could find copy so as to quote since he put it really well, but the basic idea was that an 18th century character may have been speaking an 18th century dialect - but what the listeners heard was contemporary to them. Using an authentic 18th century dialect in a modern novel makes the character sound quaint and archaic to the reader -which is not how the character would have sounded to someone listening at time. (Obviously - there are exceptions for characters who are supposed to be quaint and archaic in their own time.) So, depending on the story of course, writing in something close to contemporary language (with perhaps minor varietions for flavor) can actually be truer to the story than authentic dialog. I can think of stories where that would not be true - for example where you are trying to give a feel for how different the time you are writing about is from are own - if you are trying to make the people you are writing about feel "other" and alien and unlike us.


Cass - Aug 09, 2005 8:43:39 am PDT #5490 of 10001
Bob's learned to live with tragedy, but he knows that this tragedy is one that won't ever leave him or get better.

There was a suggestion yesterday that I feed the annoying Client from Hell to the critters yesterday. I put the call off until this morning, figured it couldn't be all that bad and decided against making Client Chow. I was so wrong.

Happy Birthday, Aimee!


Topic!Cindy - Aug 09, 2005 8:45:00 am PDT #5491 of 10001
What is even happening?

Painful cute!

Oh Plei, she's too precious, and entirely unsure about that pool experience I tell you what. What a beautiful baby.


Sparky1 - Aug 09, 2005 8:51:45 am PDT #5492 of 10001
Librarian Warlord

There was a suggestion yesterday that I feed the annoying Client from Hell to the critters yesterday.

I'm sure the critters eat every day, so it's not like you don't have another chance.

Stephanie, such wonderful pics!

Happy Birthday, Aimee!


Nora Deirdre - Aug 09, 2005 8:54:19 am PDT #5493 of 10001
I’m responsible for my own happiness? I can’t even be responsible for my own breakfast! (Bojack Horseman)

Oh Plei, she's too precious

FYI Cindy, that's Ellie, not Lily. Unless you knew that already and were just agreeing with the person who brought it up.

Have I mentioned I am dumb today?

How are you doing today, Cindy- have you been able to speak to your doctors about yesterday's events?


Volans - Aug 09, 2005 8:55:53 am PDT #5494 of 10001
move out and draw fire

Gerald Durrell, by any chance?

And Betsy gets it in one.

Mallory will.not.sleep if there's anyone around. Too interesting to writhe, poke, prod, kick, talk, etc. The only exception was the 4:00 am feeding, when we'd both fall asleep.

The babysitter was really surprised that he knows when he's alone or not (and HATES being alone). Is it weird that he does?

You'd be surprised at how quickly the pleasure of warm babylump on you gets balanced by the desire to roll over on your side.

Ah, no...I have a warm catlump. So I get that. But I still would like to cuddle with Mal.


Deena - Aug 09, 2005 9:02:28 am PDT #5495 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Kara was not ever a cuddler, which was disappointing. Aidan likes to snuggle though, so maybe the next one, Raq (if there is a next one).

I've been wondering about the doctor/cindy conversation too.

Ellie is such a pretty baby, and she has such pretty parents.


Lee - Aug 09, 2005 9:03:01 am PDT #5496 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

I have a warm catlump

Ozzie has a habit of trying to sneak up on me so he can stretch out on me without my noticing. Of course, he weighs over 25 pounds, he's longer than my torso when he stretches out, and he's usually purring loud enough to wake the dead, so it generally doesn't work that well.


Cass - Aug 09, 2005 9:03:51 am PDT #5497 of 10001
Bob's learned to live with tragedy, but he knows that this tragedy is one that won't ever leave him or get better.

I'm sure the critters eat every day, so it's not like you don't have another chance.
That is just the nicest thing I have heard all day.

The Ellie pics were quite lovely.


Sparky1 - Aug 09, 2005 9:17:33 am PDT #5498 of 10001
Librarian Warlord

That is just the nicest thing I have heard all day.

It's nice when you have something to look forward to, isn't it?

ION, Naturalizer online is giving 50% off the sale prices. So tempting to do damage because they carry my wee size.