More OUaT alt-s4 posted in Buffista Fic. In this chapter, Emma's on her hands and knees and grunts when Regina puts her hands on her.
Giles ,'Conversations with Dead People'
Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?
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Man, this is just the weirdest sex phrasing I've come across in a fic in forever:
Dean wrote an orgasm with Castiel's name on it.
And she uses it multiple times. The first time it was "silently wrote", but it pops up one in three sex scenes now.
The story reads like someone who learnt English as a third or fourth language, and didn't learn it in their first language. Her misuse of idiom or the wrong meaning of a word is spectacular. The characters had a conversation about how well one of them cicatrixes. That can't have been the first word in the dictionary when she looked it up...
Please tell me she didn't mean it in a writing-his-name-in-the-snow way...
Please tell me she didn't mean it in a writing-his-name-in-the-snow way...
Oh, the temptation to reply "Pics or it didn't happen!" That would make for a delightfully cracky porn fanart.
Next chapter of OUaT alt-s4 in Buffista Fic. In this part, someone from the movie actually appears onscreen!(On-panel? On-page?)
I just read a post on the reality of gay sex, and now I'm flinching before every 1-2-3 finger lube warmup and every standard component.
Of course he hasn't had all the sex, but fic sex (at least in D/C) is very standard in the steps it goes through.
Next chapter of alt-S4 OUaT is in Buffista Fic. This chapter has a Big Reveal and an Author's Note!
Don't usually toot my own horn for my writing, but had to share this comment I got on a fic because I laughed out loud.
My god where has this fic been all my life lol. Just gonna slow clap that bitch out cuz dayum. lovely just lovely.
Link to the fic, plz, Vortex?
I've discovered Tabi_essentually, and she is grand. The nuance, depth, and foreshadowing, not mention the genuine flashes of humour and the hit but not explicit sex ( I won't say sex scenes, because they are scenes that happen to have sex in them, but are not a primary aspect of any "scene".
I'm probably 300k into the story, and it could all end badly soon, but so far I haven't been disappointed.
Love the background for Arthur (Brick) and super love the non-needy relationship between A and E. The subtle contrasts to Mal and Dom.
Also, the whump and following h/c is teh best. Because the h/c is not a prelude to porn, and the whump isn't either.
I've probably just doomed the rest of the fic to pissing me off.