Dirty pool, author, dirty pool.

John Reese is a character who is desperate to be owned and given purpose and told what to do so that he can give his undying loyalty.

I suppose it says far more about the writer than it does about the character, when someone cannot grok that a person can be both highly skilled at ass-kicking and also have a certain amount of sexual attractiveness while displaying very little drive to assert any more authority than it takes to get his or her job done.

I suppose it says far more about the writer than it does about the character

Sometimes I can agree to disagree on characterization, and sometimes the text just remains unexamined, man.

Well, yeah. There are times when I read some fic with a view i disagree with of some character, that I can see the reasoning behind it. Perhaps the author is exaggerating the importance of some minor moment, or glomming on to a possible motivation that I disagree with. If it is really jarring, but I can see the logic behind it, I don't question the writer's competence. But there have been times when I did enquire of the writer as to what on screen occurrance brought about their interpretation of the character. Most of the time they don't bother to answer me. But then again, I do take care in how I phrase things so as not to be nasty. Some of the time when I write what I consider a scathing review, the response is gratitude for taking their work seriously enough to offer suggestions for making it better.

This year's Narnia Fic Exchange is doing pretty well, the standard assortment of quality stories to not-so-good, and then there's the amazingly classic Mary Sue story, in which three Calormene children named Arabella, Brione, and Cedric come to visit Cair Paravel. That's all that happens: they visit, they go home.

... it's kind of adorable?

But I really really hope the writer is thirteen.

I do a lot of hoping that childlike exuberance and lack of exposure explains the flaws in various stories.

The ability to see tags that people use when they reblog pictures in tumblr is many things. It's a bit OCD to go look, fine, but that's what extensions are for. And no one comments on the reblog itself, so that's where the responses are.

The idea that strangers would say my picture makes them want to cry makes me want to cry. Legit for me, even if theirs were hyperbole.

So I put my billytea-and-ryan-inspired ficlet on AO3, cause that's what one does these days. 21 hits and 3 kudos in less than two hours, yay, but they seem pretty sparse with comments over there, aren't they?

I hope you like it. It's my first fan fiction and if you don't like something just tell me so i could learn from my mistakes.

One more thing. I don't know a thing about high schools in America so i use what I've learned from movies,so sorry if something is not right.

Oh, I have a feeling this one is going to be a literary masterpiece.

It's true, most popular movies do not go into sufficient detail on the proper use of the shift key.

Some of those uncertain summaries, I just want to take those fledgling writers and cuddle them and tuck them up with tea and a good dictionary/grammar guide. Some of them I just want to shake and say "Complete sentences, dammit! And the word SHIELD actually obeys that rule you should have learned in school!"

But S.H.I.E.L.D. is not a word!

(I am going to be so tired of typing that in...6 days, I predict, if not sooner. Like now.)