Lorne: Snakes? Uh-huh. And they came out of your what? Okay. Okay, well, did they get up there themselves or is this part of a, you know, a thing? No, I'm not judging...Do we fight snakes? Angel: Only if they're giant. Or demons. Or giant demons. Are they giant demon snakes? Lorne: Well, unless this guy's 30 feet tall, I'm thinking they're of the garden variety.

'Lineage'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


§ ita § - Aug 31, 2011 6:04:43 pm PDT #7308 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I remember when that was the Fleet Center. I didn't know it had been renamed.


amych - Aug 31, 2011 6:05:34 pm PDT #7309 of 10434
Now let us crush something soft and watch it fountain blood. That is a girlish thing to want to do, yes?

Yeah, banks? Not actually as eternal an institution as we once thought!


Juliebird - Aug 31, 2011 6:06:39 pm PDT #7310 of 10434
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

Well, TD Bank Garden, but they still call it the Garden (damn, I took too long posting!), so wikipedia tells me. Modern day. June.

(ita, close your eyes)

I just want to have it there in the background, something they're hearing from a nearby shop, so that when I get a character actually in it, it'll be known that it's a sports/concert arena, and I'll get to be punny about it being a reference to the Garden in Supernatural's Heaven without having to stop and explain the building too much.

For some random reason (mostly so I don't get called out on inaccuracies) I've been going out of my way to not actually outright say the story is set in Boston (also so that I don't get too hung up on details while still drawing on what's there and what I remember growing up near there).


amych - Aug 31, 2011 6:06:45 pm PDT #7311 of 10434
Now let us crush something soft and watch it fountain blood. That is a girlish thing to want to do, yes?

But you're totally right - it's not the Garden.


Amy - Aug 31, 2011 6:07:52 pm PDT #7312 of 10434
Because books.

Everything has a name/corporate sponsor now, and I hate it, too. But I try to console myself by thinking of things like Schlitz Playhouse of Stars and the like.


Juliebird - Aug 31, 2011 6:13:21 pm PDT #7313 of 10434
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

"...he joined him at the window booth at Halftime Pizza across from the Garden."

Is that clear enough?

And this is why I'm so slow, the things I get hung up on.


Connie Neil - Aug 31, 2011 6:24:03 pm PDT #7314 of 10434
brillig

And this is why I'm so slow, the things I get hung up on.

Well, it's got to be right! I've spent hours researching things just for plot bunnies, much less things I'm actually writing.


Juliebird - Aug 31, 2011 6:30:40 pm PDT #7315 of 10434
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

I just don't want to have that one sports fan reading to point out something that I just don't know (and my google fu failed me utterly on this subject) like, say, no sports or concerts indoors at noon.


Amy - Aug 31, 2011 6:45:50 pm PDT #7316 of 10434
Because books.

But the thing is, someone will always find something. Always.

Spend your time researching, yes, but spend more time making your voice real and believable, and your pace right.


Connie Neil - Aug 31, 2011 6:51:28 pm PDT #7317 of 10434
brillig

It's amazing the people we worry about. I'm still waiting for some Renaissance history nut--other than me--to read Nessuno and complain that I got the year wrong that Cesare Borgia gave up his ecclesiastical robes and went back to secular life.