I have a draft of a SPN story I'm working on - is there someone who'd be willing to take a look at it? I'm having some issues with how the ending plays out, and I wanted to get an outside opinion on some possibel changes.
I'm not sure how old he is, but I heard him use the word 'newfangled' one time, so he's gotta be pretty far gone.
Dawn ,'Beneath You'
Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?
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Anne W. - Jun 09, 2009 2:39:24 pm PDT #5938 of 10435
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
Fay - Jun 09, 2009 2:57:46 pm PDT #5939 of 10435
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.
Yes, and yes, and yes!
Gimme!
Anne W. - Jun 09, 2009 3:59:53 pm PDT #5940 of 10435
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
Sent! Thank you very, VERY much!
Lee - Jun 09, 2009 4:47:34 pm PDT #5941 of 10435
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
I can too, Anne, if you want more eyes.
Anne W. - Jun 09, 2009 4:57:49 pm PDT #5942 of 10435
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
Thank you - that would be fabulous!
Insent
Lee - Jun 09, 2009 5:26:43 pm PDT #5943 of 10435
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
Got it. What is your turn around time?
Anne W. - Jun 09, 2009 11:55:05 pm PDT #5944 of 10435
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
No big rush.
Beverly - Jun 10, 2009 10:11:27 pm PDT #5945 of 10435
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Anne, ordinarily you know I'd be all over it. I'm surrounded by boxes at the moment. I'm going to have to wait till it's posted (and hope the boxes are dealt with by then!)
Consuela - Jun 11, 2009 8:02:47 pm PDT #5946 of 10435
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix
Anyone looking for a long, leisurely, and really very well done Kirk/Spock story (Reboot), should check this out: [link]
I'm not a bit K/S fan, but that is a very good story.
Dana - Jun 12, 2009 9:17:56 pm PDT #5947 of 10435
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.