The whole earth may be sucked into Hell, and you want my help 'cause your girlfriend's a big ho?

Buffy ,'Chosen'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


Anne W. - Aug 09, 2008 12:30:03 pm PDT #5461 of 10436
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

After submitting my fic for spn_summergen and having an "oh shit, shoulda added a line about ______," I've been wondering about the whole unfixed nature of fanfic on the web.

When I submit fic for something like Yuletide, where there's a hard and fast deadline, I'm often working right up to that deadline with barely even time for a spelling and grammar beta. I have no trouble with doing minor fixes after the fact on those fics before posting them to my own or other archives. In this case, though, I think the story could stand a thorough overhaul, with perhaps some sections fleshed out and so on.

Part of me thinks that (other than minor cosmetic tweaking), I should leave things close to as-is. Part of me thinks the story could be a much stronger one for a thorough re-working.

I'm still debating (it's not like there's any rush), but I'm curious to know what other people think. Is overhauling an already posted fic "cheating," or do you consider it one of the perks of posting online?


P.M. Marc - Aug 09, 2008 12:32:02 pm PDT #5462 of 10436
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

If I did a serious overhaul, I'd post it as a director's cut or something, rather than just updating what's up there. I mean, spelling errors I'll fix. But whole section re-writes? Nope.


Ailleann - Aug 09, 2008 12:37:28 pm PDT #5463 of 10436
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

I'm sort-of that way too. Once it's posted, it's "published" in my mind. Changing that changes the story that I put out there.


Connie Neil - Aug 09, 2008 12:39:06 pm PDT #5464 of 10436
brillig

I'd feel like I'd have to put up some sort of notice if I did a full overhaul of a story that's posted. I'm ok with fixing a typo I spot on rereading, but I'm lucky enough to have copies in various places, and those copies wouldn't get fixed, so I pretty much leave stuff alonel.


Anne W. - Aug 09, 2008 2:59:50 pm PDT #5465 of 10436
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

At this point, I'm thinking that Plei's "director's cut" label might suit my purposes quite well.

In this case I was fortunate to have two very, very able betas look over it and catch some potentially serious errors before I sent it out, but with this fic I really wish I had timed things so I could have had another week to flesh out some ideas/characters.


Connie Neil - Aug 15, 2008 9:25:10 am PDT #5466 of 10436
brillig

SGA Big Bang is Out!

[link]

Humungous big stories to read! Yay!


Consuela - Aug 15, 2008 12:09:29 pm PDT #5467 of 10436
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

Best Ellen story ever: [link]

24,000 words, basically gen, and brilliant.


Lee - Aug 15, 2008 4:56:02 pm PDT #5468 of 10436
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

I knew which one that was without looking! LOVE IT.


Consuela - Aug 15, 2008 10:09:39 pm PDT #5469 of 10436
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

Isn't it amazing? No other Ellen stories need be written.


Beverly - Aug 15, 2008 10:11:43 pm PDT #5470 of 10436
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

It's really true.