Funny thing about black and white. You mix it together and you get gray. And it doesn't matter how much white you try and put back in, you're never gonna get anything but gray.

Lilah ,'Destiny'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


P.M. Marc - Sep 07, 2007 6:35:57 pm PDT #4325 of 10436
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

(But by way of disclaimer, the list of stories I find to be improved by being gen is... um... I had one or two written down somewhere in case the question ever came up.)

I will cling to readers like you when my first choc_fic story posts.

Because really, it COULD have been gen, and taking it to slash involved a subplot, but there was a slash in the prompt! And, well, damn it...

I'd missed writing blow jobs


amych - Sep 07, 2007 6:39:45 pm PDT #4326 of 10436
Now let us crush something soft and watch it fountain blood. That is a girlish thing to want to do, yes?

choc_fic? hmm? took me a minute. remembered. yay!

Also:

there was a slash in the prompt!

An obvious case of punctuational determinism! How could you be expected to do otherwise?

yay blow jobs!


P.M. Marc - Sep 07, 2007 6:50:06 pm PDT #4327 of 10436
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

[link] Choc_Fic.

AKA, a challenge of AWESOME.

An obvious case of punctuational determinism! How could you be expected to do otherwise?

I was helpless before it! It couldn't be helped!


amych - Sep 07, 2007 7:05:16 pm PDT #4328 of 10436
Now let us crush something soft and watch it fountain blood. That is a girlish thing to want to do, yes?

I was helpless before it! It couldn't be helped!

Egg-zackly!

In other news, if I'm even going to try for Days of Awesome, my shows need to be so much more jewy. Tis sad.


Consuela - Sep 07, 2007 7:57:12 pm PDT #4329 of 10436
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

I think I would have liked the story better if it had been gen.

Nutty is me in this. I ended up skimming the porn: I've read too much McKay/Sheppard to have any emotional attachment or response to the sex scenes. And like Nutty, I wish the story had been more ambitious, more challenging. Eh. Perhaps I'm just hard to please today. On edit: which is not to say it's not well-done; I just wanted more and different from it. Which is really my issue and not the writer's.

I also feel just a tiny bit snubbed, since the structure of telling the story through a variety of historical lenses, interspersed with straight narrative, is one I used less than two months ago, and got no more than a nod. Okay, yeah, not 55,000 words and I'm not Speranza, but it's not like the form was invented for that story...


Fay - Sep 07, 2007 9:53:29 pm PDT #4330 of 10436
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.

Oooh! Linky link, 'Suela?


Katie M - Sep 08, 2007 4:08:35 am PDT #4331 of 10436
I was charmed (albeit somewhat perplexed) by the fannish sensibility of many of the music choices -- it's like the director was trying to vid Canada. --loligo on the Olympic Opening Ceremonies

Consuela - Sep 08, 2007 5:52:08 am PDT #4332 of 10436
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

Fay, here: [link]

Like I said, neither epic nor slash, but it's not that unusual a format.

Eh, I sound all bitter and sour grapesy, which I don't mean to be.


Theodosia - Sep 08, 2007 7:05:09 am PDT #4333 of 10436
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

I do think Cesperanza is very talented, but there is enough fannish awe that she's accumulated over time that I think fannish critical circuits get overwhelmed about her current work.


Fay - Sep 08, 2007 7:21:02 am PDT #4334 of 10436
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.

That's entirely possible.

For my part, I didn't register who the author was until I'd finished reading, and in point of fact I've heard some highly unflattering things about her conduct towards other fen which does not predispose me to fangirl her - indeed, quite the reverse. But I liked the story, and I liked the format. ymmv