I tried for raising the tent pole in their love circus, but my mind squidged off on another track.
Jayne: We was just about to spring into action, Captain. Complicated escape and rescue op. Wash: I was going to watch. It was very exciting.
'Shindig'
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askye - Jun 29, 2005 11:34:34 am PDT #364 of 10434
Thrive to spite them
Dana - Jun 29, 2005 11:36:51 am PDT #365 of 10434
"I'm useless alone." // "We're all useless alone. It's a good thing you're not alone."
he was a devoted mime
t snicker
erikaj - Jun 29, 2005 11:40:52 am PDT #366 of 10434
Always Anti-fascist!
That puts a different complexion on the "stuck-in-a-box" thing.
askye - Jun 29, 2005 6:03:34 pm PDT #367 of 10434
Thrive to spite them
On the way home from work I worked out how to get
"raising the tent-pole in the love circus"into a drabble, but then forget it in the midst of taking care of Mom's cat.
Maybe it will come to me in my sleep.
Deena - Jun 29, 2005 7:53:49 pm PDT #368 of 10434
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Oh dear lord. Those are amazingly bad.
Connie Neil - Jun 29, 2005 7:58:52 pm PDT #369 of 10434
brillig
huh huh huh.
askye said come.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Jun 29, 2005 9:58:17 pm PDT #370 of 10434
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
It's not exactly the phrase, but I think it's within the spirit.
Gripping the bed-head as if it were a trampeze, Micheal swung his legs up and around Nikita's body, which was sequinned with sweet sweat. Shoving hard against the leverage this gained, he strained to raise the tent pole ever higher in the Big Top of their love.
As he came, spraying a firework of semen deep into her uterus, Nikita cried out that he would always be her Ringmaster. Then her body, too, spasmed in the involuntary contentions of a woman in love, her innermost lips flapping like a tent in a hurricane.
Consuela - Jun 29, 2005 10:03:51 pm PDT #371 of 10434
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix
ohdearlord.
Am-Chau wins the prize.
(Y'all have made me very self-conscious, since I just wrote my first ever really explicit sex scene tonight and now I'm all worried that it sucks.)
P.M. Marc - Jun 29, 2005 10:06:19 pm PDT #372 of 10434
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Y'all have made me very self-conscious, since I just wrote my first ever really explicit sex scene tonight and now I'm all worried that it sucks.
I assume it's SGA? You want a not-in-the-fandom pair of eyes to give it a look?
Susan W. - Jun 29, 2005 10:10:58 pm PDT #373 of 10434
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Y'all have made me very self-conscious, since I just wrote my first ever really explicit sex scene tonight and now I'm all worried that it sucks.
Heh. I just came here from working on, not my first ever sex scene, but the consummation scene of the work-in-progress. I was thinking how very awkward a rough draft it was, how hard it was to get both the emotional impact and the physical details on the page simultaneously, etc., and wondering if I'd ever be able to edit it into something all sexy and poignant and just a little heartbreaking like it needs to be.
But I'm feeling much better now. It may be bad, it may need draft after draft of rewriting, but I'm fairly confident I didn't misuse any words or concoct any bizarre metaphors.