LJ! Bwah!
Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?
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Reading that makes me wonder what horrible-ness she'll come up wtih next.
I keep expecting something like:
She was a carnival of emotions --- her desire strobbed through her like a ferris wheel. Her mind dizzy like too many trips on the tiltawhirl as he slid his joy rod into her happy fun spot.
Oh, I sense a competition looming. The worst bad-Nikita-writer-like similie/metaphor you can come up with.
She thrummed like a subwoofer and begged him to strip her speaker wires. He pulled out his multi-purpose tool and lubricated it, proving who was her handyman.
Their desire pierced her like a sandsupr, sharp but relief when he kissed her, hot like sand. She cried out, her voice like an eagle. Her wetness oozed around him as he murrmered, "My sweet mermaid" and a tsumani of passion crested over her.
That Doctor/Rose thing is very Bwah!
His molten gaze set off a bomb in her womb. His massive tool split her over and over, shaking her to her atomic core. They imploded as one being in a great mushroom cloud of desire.
Oh, that's good.
Their cupoling was a build up of passion, Nikitia longed for the release that, as a BASE jumper, she knew would be like free fall. Michael was her parachute.
Her passion built and grew, Michael kissed her, laved her skin until she rithed on the sheets, soft as down. Nikita moaned, low and long. She was gushing between the white pilars of her legs, Michael hovered over her, his stiff, solid column readying to plunge within her. He plunged again and again, like a jet blast his pent up passion rocked her rotunda.
These are making my brain hurt.
Continue.