I'm fairly certain I said no interruptions.

Buffy ,'Potential'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


Nutty - Oct 30, 2005 4:46:44 pm PST #1308 of 10434
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

My expectations are powerfully colored by the fandoms I've been in, but, dude -- all these relationships, where is my angst? It is confounding how nice and well-adjusted everybody seems to be.

There needs to be an outbreak of the un-charming kind of character flaws.


§ ita § - Oct 30, 2005 4:51:03 pm PST #1309 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Like dandruff?


Nutty - Oct 30, 2005 5:07:32 pm PST #1310 of 10434
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

Dandruff is not a character flaw. Dandruff is like flatulence, love-handles, and allergies -- physical flaw. Although if a character were simultaneously to have dandruff, flatulence, love-handles, and allergies, he might be insecure enough to develop character flaws.

Not that I particularly want to read fanfic about black garments turning gray and sex acts being interrupted by farts and sneezing.


§ ita § - Oct 30, 2005 5:12:09 pm PST #1311 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

You're very optimistic. I was trying to match the degree of flaw to the fandom. Still, maybe Ronon could ... I guess hiccoughs don't count either, huh?


Nutty - Oct 30, 2005 5:21:25 pm PST #1312 of 10434
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

Ronon could stink up the joint with massive B.O. Being naturally stinky is a physical flaw, but being unwilling to bathe regularly would be a character flaw.

Still and all, B.O. is not so much with the interpersonal angst, so much as the Ivory jokes. When I think character flaw, I think relatively big.


§ ita § - Oct 30, 2005 5:26:54 pm PST #1313 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

If you don't think Ivory jokes around Ronon don't have the potential to get real painful real fast, you're not thinking big at all.


Matt the Bruins fan - Oct 30, 2005 7:50:48 pm PST #1314 of 10434
"I remember when they eventually introduced that drug kingpin who murdered people and smuggled drugs inside snakes and I was like 'Finally. A normal person.'” —RahvinDragand

McKay has the love handles and the allergies (real or imagined), and an argumentative tactless personality to boot. The good writers tend to employ at least some of that in service of realism.


Consuela - Oct 30, 2005 8:16:47 pm PST #1315 of 10434
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

Give them time with the angst. Although I think they've got a good grounding with Sheppard, if they work it. Possibly an orphan, or at least on the outs with his family; nearly cashiered for insubordination and with a black mark on his record; forced to shoot his commanding officer; forced to take over said officer's command without any training or support; and now contaminated with an alien virus that can turn him into a killing machine.

Of all of them, he's actually gotten the most development on the show, it's just that we don't see him change that much in response to all that.


§ ita § - Oct 30, 2005 8:19:57 pm PST #1316 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

If he doesn't change, aren't they just events, and not actually development?


Consuela - Oct 30, 2005 8:22:47 pm PST #1317 of 10434
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

Hence my line where I said, "if they work it." The SG-1 writers are terrifically bad at actually following up on that sort of thing. And yet, if I were a trusting soul, I would think, aha! they're setting him up for some interesting stuff!

But it's Gekko, so probably not.

Shep's the Jack O'Neill of this show: he'll stay snarky and sane despite everything, and David Hewlett will get the actual character development and angsty acting.