Wash: Psychic, though? That sounds like something out of science fiction. Zoe: We live in a space ship, dear. Wash: So?

'Objects In Space'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Laga - Apr 07, 2008 10:52:35 am PDT #9981 of 10001
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

If it was me I'd jump right in and start writing, then see how long it was shaping up to be. Of course, I never finish anything so you probably shouldn't listen to me.


Amy - Apr 08, 2008 6:01:15 am PDT #9982 of 10001
Because books.

erika, I think you need to really consider the scope of the story. Do you have secondary characters who could be developed, provide a subplot? How complicated is the protagonist's conflict?

Also, remember that a novel can be a couple different lengths (although you should always be thinking at least 70,000 words, unless it's YA, and sometimes even then).

Plus? As hard as it can be to get a novel published, there are still a LOT more outlets for it than short stories, these days.


erikaj - Apr 08, 2008 7:58:13 am PDT #9983 of 10001
If Scooby Doo taught me anything, it's that the only thing to fear is real-estate developers.Lisa Simpson

I could probably come up with things; I've been thinking about some of these characters for a while.ETA: But I have thought I was going to attempt another novel before, and those efforts have failed to gel.


hippocampus - Apr 09, 2008 12:36:37 pm PDT #9984 of 10001
not your mom's socks.

Mik hated it from the first day. The center room. And it hated him back. The fake gravity buzzed in there like old fluorescent tube lighting, and smelled like burnt static. Made him sick. So he stuck to the fringes, got himself useful with insulation and wiring. So what if he'd been hired as a socializer. So what, out here? Truth was, the center room was always overcrowded, even when no one was there. Someone's left behind something right there in his face, every time, reminding him of all the other people who stopped there, every moment of every day.


Beverly - Apr 09, 2008 9:17:45 pm PDT #9985 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Very atmospheric, Sox. Sorta reminiscent of some of Cherryh's stuff. Or maybe Bester.


hippocampus - Apr 10, 2008 2:43:44 am PDT #9986 of 10001
not your mom's socks.

thanks Beverly - can you tell me a little more? My brain went different directions with that.


Susan W. - Apr 10, 2008 7:36:47 am PDT #9987 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

My Center

Once I though life’s purpose was to live as long as you can. But these past few years I’ve seen so much death that I’m learning to accept, though not without pain, that my death is beyond my control. Now I understand that what counts is living well. Of course I will die before I’m ready. I will leave unfinished work behind—otherwise, I’ll have stopped writing, and that’s not acceptable. But with whatever time I have, I will live well. Every day I will love, I will tell my stories, and I will seek knowledge. That is my center.


Beverly - Apr 10, 2008 11:14:36 am PDT #9988 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Mik hated it from the first day. The center room. And it hated him back. The fake gravity buzzed in there like old fluorescent tube lighting, and smelled like burnt static. Made him sick. So he stuck to the fringes, got himself useful with insulation and wiring. So what if he'd been hired as a socializer. So what, out here? Truth was, the center room was always overcrowded, even when no one was there. Someone's left behind something right there in his face, every time, reminding him of all the other people who stopped there, every moment of every day.

The sentence fragments remind me a lot of how Cherryh writes SF--particularly the Chanur series, and the whole Downbelow Station stuff--several series touched at the Station. Merchanters Luck--which while not her best book by far, is my favorite sf of hers--I also have fave fantasies, which are so lyrical and layered it's like another person wrote them. Anyway--the fragmentary communication is like hers. It's actually more descriptive and more vernacular than full sentences would be, which confers immediacy and assumes familiarity with the subject and surroundings.

For Bester I'm thinking The Stars My Destination, which was so very descriptive in a visceral way of the enclosures and landmarks and touchstones of living in space. It would be a completely different existence than planetbound life, and what you wrote just there infers that difference without resorting to big flashy arrow signs and anvils.

Um. As it were. Did I say I liked it? 'Cause I did.


Beverly - Apr 10, 2008 11:20:05 am PDT #9989 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Once I though life’s purpose was to live as long as you can. But these past few years I’ve seen so much death that I’m learning to accept, though not without pain, that my death is beyond my control. Now I understand that what counts is living well. Of course I will die before I’m ready. I will leave unfinished work behind—otherwise, I’ll have stopped writing, and that’s not acceptable. But with whatever time I have, I will live well. Every day I will love, I will tell my stories, and I will seek knowledge. That is my center.

Susan, I'm gratified to see a piece in this thread that has nothing to do with your WIP. I'm sorry the events in your life of late have had to be the cause of that, but I'm really glad to see you working through it this way. I hope you continue, and I hope it helps you both write better, and live better.


Susan W. - Apr 10, 2008 11:33:08 am PDT #9990 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Susan, I'm gratified to see a piece in this thread that has nothing to do with your WIP.

Well, I'll probably post pieces that are connected to my WIP, too. I like the current community of dead and/or imaginary people who've taken over my brain.