I like Hungry as the Grave. It has a nice rhythm.
They're doing it backwards; walking up the down slide.
River ,'Ariel'
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
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Susan W. - Mar 20, 2008 12:06:36 pm PDT #9916 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Amy - Mar 20, 2008 12:11:48 pm PDT #9917 of 10001
Because books.
That's one vote!
SailAweigh - Mar 20, 2008 12:18:19 pm PDT #9918 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
I dunno, my mind went immediately to Hungry Like the Wolf and big hair bands.
Amy - Mar 20, 2008 12:19:45 pm PDT #9919 of 10001
Because books.
So which one do you like? It's okay if it's none of them.
Ginger - Mar 20, 2008 12:24:11 pm PDT #9920 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
The story would be a different twist on Poe's "Premature Burial."
I like "Hungry as the Grave," particularly since I found this:
Cruel as Death, and hungry as the Grave!
Burning for blood! bony, and gaunt, and grim!
Assembling wolves in raging troops descend;
And, pouring o'er the country, bear along,
Keen as the north wind sweeps the glossy snows.
All is their prize.
The Seasons: Winter, J. Thomson
Typo Boy - Mar 20, 2008 12:25:41 pm PDT #9921 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.
There is another ballad similar to the "Unquiet Grave" .
A wife mourns her dead husband excessively, the dead husband comes back to comfort her. The results are not good.
Umm, obviously I don't remember the name.
Allyson - Mar 20, 2008 12:30:49 pm PDT #9922 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Ooof. I have huge writer's block, made worse by trying to sort out chapter subjects that all seem to flow together.
-t - Mar 20, 2008 12:32:13 pm PDT #9923 of 10001
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration
I dunno, my mind went immediately to Hungry Like the Wolf and big hair bands.
Me, too, but that doesn't seem like a downside. I like Hungry As the Grave.
Amy - Mar 20, 2008 12:33:08 pm PDT #9924 of 10001
Because books.
I have huge writer's block, made worse by trying to sort out chapter subjects that all seem to flow together.
Lay 'em out for us.
Toddson - Mar 20, 2008 12:39:30 pm PDT #9925 of 10001
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"
oh ... how about The Empty Grave?