Angel: You know, I killed my actual dad. It was one of the first things I did when I became a vampire. Wesley: I hardly see how that's the same situation. Angel: Yeah. I didn't really think that one through.

'Lineage'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Beverly - Mar 10, 2008 6:51:24 am PDT #9852 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Oh Laura. Um. That last visual is striking, of the box sinking amid the lily stems. And the last line is quietly powerful.

We're a lively bunch of Pandoras, aren't we?

(In my mom's defense, she always baked me a cake--from scratch. Presentation of any sort was not part of her purview.)


Laura - Mar 10, 2008 6:59:41 am PDT #9853 of 10001
Our wings are not tired.

Thanks Beverly. I'm a shy one that usually looks at the challenge then puts something in my journal for my eyes only. I'm trying to climb out of my box a bit here in my safe place.

Mom almost always used the Sunday comics for wrapping paper. You brought back that fond memory. Now I think her husband does the wrapping because it has improved, slightly.


SailAweigh - Mar 10, 2008 7:55:17 am PDT #9854 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Laura, I love the image of the box and the lilies. Thanks for getting over the shy!


Amy - Mar 10, 2008 8:35:23 am PDT #9855 of 10001
Because books.

Wow, those were both great.

Bev, yours was really hard to read, in a really good way.

And yay Laura, for joining us! That drabble was just perfect.


Amy - Mar 10, 2008 8:43:52 am PDT #9856 of 10001
Because books.

A happy "open the box" drabble.

~~~

She doesn’t understand the object of the game at first. The box itself is enough for her, the crackle of shiny paper under her hands as she bats at it, curls her fingers in the bow.

“Bah,” she says when we prompt her, proud of herself, beaming, smile shiny with drool. She’s teething again.

We push the box toward her again, watch as she rolls it, smacks it, clearly delighted with its easy slide across the carpet. Her brothers laugh, and she frowns at them, displeased.

“Bah,” she says again.

So we show her, ripping the paper gently. “Open it.”


-t - Mar 10, 2008 8:57:16 am PDT #9857 of 10001
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

Oh, these are all wonderful! Way to get over the shy, Laura.

I'm still thinking about last week's, even though it is closed.


Laga - Mar 10, 2008 9:02:13 am PDT #9858 of 10001
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

these drabbles are like little treasure boxes opening for me today


Connie Neil - Mar 10, 2008 9:13:59 am PDT #9859 of 10001
brillig

The magic box (a little long)

"She's your mother," I tell Hubby, "you distract her." He sighs and goes into the kitchen. I turn the computer box around and undo the screws.

"--can't open it!" my mother-in-law is saying. My long-suffering husband again tries to explain that computers aren't run by fairies and magic smoke.

I take off the side panel. As I suspected, the power supply for the hard drive wasn't seated correctly. I check the other cables, pull out a dust puppy, then close it back up. I reconnect everything, then push the power button. It beeps, then Windows gives its little chime.

MIL comes out of the kitchen and stares at the computer. "It works now?"

I take the coward's path. After all, it took three people and an hour to convince her that if you filled up hard drives, you didn't need to throw them away and get a new one. "Yes, it works."


Laura - Mar 10, 2008 9:46:01 am PDT #9860 of 10001
Our wings are not tired.

Hee! Amy and Connie are both making me smile. I can see both scenes so clearly.


Laga - Mar 10, 2008 9:56:39 am PDT #9861 of 10001
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

I love the theme of children and the elderly not understanding how the boxes work