I like the ruffles.

Kaylee ,'Shindig'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Typo Boy - Feb 29, 2008 7:16:13 am PST #9837 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Have now skimmed rather than skipped that discussion. In context of that discussion isn't "made me LOL" now Bitchspeak for "I found it really repulsive"? [Er being funny. I'm know if that is what you wanted to say, that is not how you would tell me.]


Susan W. - Feb 29, 2008 7:26:31 am PST #9838 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Nah, I just meant that I don't use LOL unless an actual laughing noise made it past my lips!


Lee - Mar 02, 2008 9:13:23 am PST #9839 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

The transformation challenge is now closed. Thanks for a great topic suggestion, Deena.

This week's challenge is animated or automated. (please interpret that however you want)


SailAweigh - Mar 05, 2008 11:19:34 am PST #9840 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Happy Feet

She heard the ball land on the floor with a wet smack. Turning around, she saw him standing there, hands spread across the lattice of the childproof gate like starfish crawling along the seafloor. Bouncing on his feet a little, he tipped his head back and gave her a wide, not-very-toothy, smile. This was a game they played whenever she washed the kitchen floor. He wasn’t allowed in while she cleaned, but when she was done he got a reward from the cookie jar. It had become automatic. She heard his squeal on her way to open the penguin, “Tookie!”


-t - Mar 05, 2008 12:39:51 pm PST #9841 of 10001
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

Very nice!


SailAweigh - Mar 05, 2008 5:39:23 pm PST #9842 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Heh. I couldn't disappoint Bev! Plus, it was nice to do a little cheerier drabble than what's been coming out of my pen up to now.


Ginger - Mar 05, 2008 5:45:54 pm PST #9843 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Automated Drabble

It was a

☐dark ☐wet ☐clear and

☐stormy ☐blue ☐shiny

☐night ☐sea ☐limo.

The ☐boy ☐model ☐dog

☐sat ☐idled ☐ ☐lay

on the ☐rocky ☐dangerous ☐empty

☐street ☐beach ☐runway.

There was the sound of far away ☐sirens ☐thunder ☐applause

and muffled ☐engines ☐screams ☐shots.

A man walking by threw a

☐sno-cone ☐gun ☐rose

☐into the water ☐at a girl ☐into the trash.

His shoes were caked with

☐dough ☐blood ☐tomato sauce

and he was singing

☐ Hallelujah ☐ show tunes ☐"Meet the Swinger. Polaroid Swinger."

The man

☐screamed ☐fainted ☐laughed

when he saw the ☐cookie jar ☐ pizza ☐body

lying in front of him.

The ☐boy ☐model ☐dog

ran to him and ☐licked ☐kicked ☐kissed him.

The sound of ☐sirens ☐thunder ☐applause

grew louder as they both ☐howled ☐ran ☐ate.


amych - Mar 05, 2008 5:54:39 pm PST #9844 of 10001
Now let us crush something soft and watch it fountain blood. That is a girlish thing to want to do, yes?

The sound of ☐applause


SailAweigh - Mar 05, 2008 5:56:18 pm PST #9845 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Hee.


-t - Mar 06, 2008 6:23:01 am PST #9846 of 10001
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

Clever!