And I myself will be wearing pink taffeta as chenille would not go with my complexion.

Giles ,'Touched'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


-t - Feb 12, 2008 1:29:33 pm PST #9758 of 10001
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

Thanks for the warning, Sail. You are on fire, drabble-wise!


SailAweigh - Feb 12, 2008 1:33:33 pm PST #9759 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Heh. It's amazing what one can do when forced to sit in a meeting that has absolutely nothing to do with what you're working on.


Aims - Feb 12, 2008 2:53:55 pm PST #9760 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

Frst drabble in forever.

Parting Shot

You put me on a pedestal only to climb up and knock me off. You threw me aside for others and then begged me back, claiming they never measured up. I took it all in, thinking this was the way of love.

Until the day I left the girl behind and embraced the woman ahead. As I walked away, I noticed a doll on the ground: The blonde hair and buxom chest all molded into an ideal form. I picked it up and threw it to you.

“Here. A woman you can actually handle.”

And I walked out the door.


hippocampus - Feb 12, 2008 4:09:09 pm PST #9761 of 10001
not your mom's socks.

Shot: a photograph at the point where city becomes river, and back again. The bridge is stage, it is medium, it is tripod. The timer is cheap because the camera is cheap and so it captures them a moment too soon. So the bridge captures solid: cobbles and arch, a light post. And they capture motion. They are a blur, a single form, moving quickly together, to that coming together that will be the first photograph, the one that will begin the rest. It has so much weight on it, this photograph. They think they will think of it for years to come as The Photo. And in it, they will be moving towards each other. Then they will stop and smile, as you do when you first meet someone and take a photo with them. They will clutch hands briefly, and begin to walk back to retrieve the camera. Their fingers, which will rejoin again and again, are, briefly, with the air around them vibrant and blurred, parting.


Beverly - Feb 12, 2008 7:00:32 pm PST #9762 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Ooooohhhhh.


Typo Boy - Feb 14, 2008 2:12:16 pm PST #9763 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

For The Parting Shot challenge:

A Tender Moment


"Honey, you seem awfully tired this morning. You told me last week that today was the big meeting. Will you be able to sell your proposal to top management?"

"No problem, love of my life. You know how hard I worked preparing the presentation. I can tackle any questions or objections. Tired? I'm showered, shaven, breakfasted, caffeinated, and hydrated. I even have a twenty minute walk in fresh air to get to work. Everything that can keep a man alert has been done."

"Except getting more than three hours sleep instead of playing Evercrack. Good luck at work today, sweetheart."


sarameg - Feb 14, 2008 3:00:10 pm PST #9764 of 10001

Grown Up:

You turn up the volume on the television as I fire back in this silly unemotional debate we're having. I stop, stunned mid-sentence as the volume drowns me out and you render me invisible, irrelevant. The last of childhood's scales fall from my eyes and now you have to earn what was once freely and worshipfully given: my respect.

I guess you got your parting shot, but its mark wasn't what you intended.


Typo Boy - Feb 14, 2008 3:32:20 pm PST #9765 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

"this silly unemotional"

Was the "un" intended?


sarameg - Feb 14, 2008 3:33:22 pm PST #9766 of 10001

Yup. Very deliberately so.


Typo Boy - Feb 14, 2008 3:41:51 pm PST #9767 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Ok, sorry. In that case I don't really get it.