Mal: You want to tell me how come there's a statue of you here looking at me like I owe him something? Jayne: Wishing I could, Captain.

'Jaynestown'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Susan W. - Jan 03, 2008 10:49:08 am PST #9634 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Hm. I could do something like, "When Famous Name died in Premature Year, no one could have guessed that the death of such an obscure and insignificant young man would lead twenty-five years later to Event Y."


-t - Jan 03, 2008 11:35:27 am PST #9635 of 10001
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

Yeah, I like that. I also think "What if" is okay and in the sci-fi tradition of describing alternate histories, but the "When So-and-so died" is grabbier.

Write whatever you have, MM! A scrap of dialog, a scene, an outline, whatever is in your head that is making you think the story could work. It doesn't have to burst full-grown from your forehead.

Pay no attention to the ideas I keep shoving over into the corner because I need to focus on doing laundry and unpacking. I want to read yours.


erikaj - Jan 04, 2008 10:23:24 am PST #9636 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Is anyone interested in taking a look at my essay that's sort of about sex, but without very many Dirty Parts...it's for the feministing yes means yes anthology(Well, if they accept it) Deadline's in March, but I want a few weeks to polish it. Thanks!


Typo Boy - Jan 04, 2008 10:37:06 am PST #9637 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Erika - if you want my take, my e-mail profile is good.


erikaj - Jan 04, 2008 10:39:23 am PST #9638 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Cool...I'll finish writing the draft over the weekend and send it Monday. Thank you!


Susan W. - Jan 07, 2008 12:26:22 pm PST #9639 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Has anyone heard of a book on screenwriting called Save the Cat, by Blake Snyder? My local RWA chapter is having him in to give a workshop, and I'm trying to decide if it'd be useful to me as someone who's not a screenwriter and has no aspirations to ever become one, but who is trying to write a page-turning adventure story.


Typo Boy - Jan 07, 2008 1:23:29 pm PST #9640 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

You know what helps answer a question like that? Ask the person giving the workshop. If he is not a total jerk, he will answer honestly. And if he is a total jerk, there is a reasonable chance his reply will reveal it.


Amy - Jan 07, 2008 2:01:32 pm PST #9641 of 10001
Because books.

I haven't heard of it, Susan, but I don't know much about screenwriting either.

I think in terms of building a three-act story, though, the workshop could be really valuable. Because ten to one, he's not going to talk about script format but about story arcs.


Liese S. - Jan 08, 2008 6:03:31 pm PST #9642 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Two verses about fear.

Why I Do What I Do
(and what it’s doing to me)

He said, "Two people I know were killed this weekend."
And I just nodded.

I asked him how it happened,
but not who, for fear I knew.


Thoughts On Introversion

He called with the invitation.
I declined, of course.

And then I lied with the reason
So he'd have something reasonable to say to them.

It wasn't until later that I realized
I couldn't go because I was still working.

But I'd given an excuse
Assuming I couldn't go because of fear.


Lee - Jan 17, 2008 11:34:57 am PST #9643 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

Polgara mentioned elsewhere that the Library of Congress has posted some of its photographs on Flickr

How would people feel about having a round of drabbles based on 10 or so of them?