River: I didn't think you'd come for me. Simon: Well, you're a dummy.

'Serenity'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Susan W. - Nov 25, 2007 9:02:32 pm PST #9526 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

This is a bit more basic/mechanical than our usual topics on this thread, but I have a question:

I just replaced the prologue of my alternate history with an obituary--that of the Important Personage whose premature death is where my world's history first departs from that of the one we're all living in. Incidentally, I hated killing that prologue, since it was very prettily written. I came closer to channeling Patrick O'Brian than I'm normally capable of, and I kept re-reading it to gloat over my elegant turns of phrase. However, I realized that it was more than the reader needs to know about events happening 25 years before the main action of the story, featuring a character who never appears again for the very good reason that he's dead.

So I cut the affecting death scene and just wrote a one-sentence obituary (one sentence because in my world the guy dies too young to become that Important of a Personage). And I'm proud of my google-fu in tracking down a newspaper for the town where he died and in figuring out how to word a period-appropriate obituary. But I don't know how to format the darn thing. Should I still have "PROLOGUE" as the section header? Right now it's something like this:

From the PERIODICAL of PLACE, DATE

OBITUARY

The obituary itself, which is one longish sentence about the guy, how old he was, where he died, and what of.

Does that sound right for manuscript formatting? I'm sure it'll look different in the actual book if I'm so fortunate as to sell it, but that's not my problem.


Atropa - Nov 29, 2007 9:39:40 am PST #9527 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

::runs in and commences flailing::

So, a Rather Large Publishing House has made an offer on the GCS book proposal.

I'll post more details when everything is signed and whatnot, but zomg! An offer! Eeeeeee!

(x-posted with Beep Me.)


Liese S. - Nov 29, 2007 9:41:27 am PST #9528 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Whohooo! Congratulations, Jilli!


Allyson - Nov 29, 2007 9:42:00 am PST #9529 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Heh. So....Jilli.....what do you think about blurbing my next book? Now that you're gonna be SO FAMOUS?


Amy - Nov 29, 2007 9:42:44 am PST #9530 of 10001
Because books.

SO much YAY!


Nicole - Nov 29, 2007 9:44:06 am PST #9531 of 10001
I'm getting the pig!

YAY Jilli!!!


Kristen - Nov 29, 2007 9:44:13 am PST #9532 of 10001

That's so awesome! Congrats, Jilli!


sumi - Nov 29, 2007 9:44:59 am PST #9533 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

Woo hoo Jilli!!


Ailleann - Nov 29, 2007 9:45:38 am PST #9534 of 10001
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

Woooo Jilli!!


juliana - Nov 29, 2007 9:52:11 am PST #9535 of 10001
I’d be lying if I didn’t say that I miss them all tonight…

YAY Jilli!!!! Whoo!!!