Buffy: So how'd she get away with the bad mojo stuff? Anya: Giles sold it to her. Giles: Well, I didn't know it was her. I mean, how could I? If it's any consolation, I may have overcharged her.

'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Typo Boy - Aug 05, 2007 8:24:13 pm PDT #9228 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Well since I only put in the link on my third edit I'll repeat it here-subsite for scottish baby name (note ads on this site are pretty obviously trying to plant spyware):

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Susan W. - Aug 05, 2007 8:27:56 pm PDT #9229 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Thanks for the help! I think she's going to be Margaret. It suits her, and my protagonist, who's taken up residence in a corner of my brain and made himself at home since I started this manuscript, is nodding sagely and agreeing that's her name.

(Heather is lovely, but I don't think it was in use in the 18th century.)


sumi - Aug 05, 2007 8:28:49 pm PDT #9230 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

I like Margaret - plus there are like a million nicknames people could call her if they were close.


Laga - Aug 05, 2007 8:37:01 pm PDT #9231 of 10001
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

that's my seester's name. Margaret Anne.


Daisy Jane - Aug 05, 2007 8:38:39 pm PDT #9232 of 10001
"This bar smells like kerosene and stripper tears."

(Heather is lovely, but I don't think it was in use in the 18th century.)

Missed it by a century.


Toddson - Aug 06, 2007 3:41:30 am PDT #9233 of 10001
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

Coming in late, Margaret's good, but Janet is a good classic Scottish name (unless I'm wrong about the time it was in use ... which is always a possibility).


Typo Boy - Aug 06, 2007 8:44:30 pm PDT #9234 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

One last shot at drabble challenges - a main challenge and an alternative.

"If not for bad luck, I'd have no luck at all".

alternative challenge: "blue" :


msbelle - Aug 07, 2007 5:50:16 am PDT #9235 of 10001
I remember the crazy days. 500 posts an hour. Nubmer! Natgbsb

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Laga - Aug 07, 2007 10:49:41 am PDT #9236 of 10001
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

My first attempt came out kind of coded and personal. Maybe I should have tried "bad luck instead"

I first saw the blue girl at a party. Literally across a smoke filled room she was. She was ruffled and mascaraed. I was ripped-jeaned and safety-pinned. I don’t recall if I worked up the courage to talk to her that night. Some day I did. Or went out of my way to shop at the record store where she worked. Then one day like clouds parting she told me she had seen me across that room too. But all things pass. Absence doesn’t always work the way you’d expect. She’s that blue woman now. Drifting away into the blue.


Typo Boy - Aug 07, 2007 11:54:05 am PDT #9237 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Laga, I like it. Coded and personal or not it seems pretty clear what is going on and what it means to you. Sure part of the story is in the shadows, but that is the nature of three dimensional writing. Only flat writing, writing without perspective gives you ever detail, every motive, every meaning.