Hey, man, where are my pants? I have my hippo dignity!

Oz ,'Bring On The Night'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Zenkitty - Jun 04, 2007 4:46:25 pm PDT #8946 of 10001
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.

yay, Jilli! Well, at least she was kind enough to tell you you'd have to wait, instead of leaving you twisting in the wind for a few weeks. Still, boo waiting!


Amy - Jun 04, 2007 4:53:19 pm PDT #8947 of 10001
Because books.

Yay, Jilli! For finishing it and sending it and hearing that she received it already!

Three weeks will fly. (You can look for more pink trim while you wait!)

Also, yay for seeing posts in here! This poor thread has been lonely.


Strix - Jun 04, 2007 4:56:22 pm PDT #8948 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

True, AmyLiz.

Here's a drabble topic. Just for fun:

Cheap red wine


Amy - Jun 04, 2007 4:57:08 pm PDT #8949 of 10001
Because books.

Ooh, that's a good one, Erin. Lemme go think. Maybe I should pour a glass for inspiration...


Strix - Jun 04, 2007 4:59:38 pm PDT #8950 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

By all means!


Amy - Jun 04, 2007 5:43:35 pm PDT #8951 of 10001
Because books.

Okay, I had ice cream instead. And a pain killer, for my back. This could be totally purple and cliched, and I wouldn't know since sugar rush + opiates = dumb happy Amy.

"Cheap Red Wine"

He's easy and sweet, always available when she needs something to fill her up. Some days the hollowness is a jarring echo, like a penny inside an empty can, and she needs something to drown out the noise of her loneliness.

One phone call is all it takes. He's always home, probably bent over his books or his computer, not that she cares. He gets the job done, that's the point. A little conversation, a drink, and then the dizzy rush of his mouth and his hands on her skin. She could drink him all night, like cheap red wine.


sj - Jun 04, 2007 5:49:33 pm PDT #8952 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

Thanks for helping me procrastinate on my schoolwork, Erin.

"Cheap Red Wine"

“We can bring wine for ourselves this weekend.”

“No, we’re at the liquor store now. Just tell us what you like.”

“Are you sure? We really don’t mind.”

Realizing it’s useless, I give her the names of two reasonably priced, widely available brands of wine.

The next night, at dinner, we are served red wine from an oversized bottle.

“Sorry, they didn’t have the wines that you mentioned. I hope this is ok.”

We say, “Oh, it’s fine.”

We think to ourselves, next time we’ll bring our own wine, because my family can’t seem to resist buying cheap, red wine.


dcp - Jun 04, 2007 6:01:14 pm PDT #8953 of 10001
The more I learn, the more I realize how little I know.

Heh, what timing. I was reminded of this just the other day. It's a funny memory, sorta, in hindsight. It's how I learned I can't handle alcohol.

More than a sip but less than a gulp, it lights a small fire in my belly, and I feel the warmth spread outward until it reaches my spine--where it pauses, gathers itself back together, and climbs steadily upward. In less than a minute it has licked its way past my neck and crept into my skull, where it crouches on top of my brain and starts to pound, pound, pound, until I can't see straight, can't think straight, can't do anything but pray for the pain to end, and promise myself I'll never, never, never do this again....


Connie Neil - Jun 04, 2007 6:31:04 pm PDT #8954 of 10001
brillig

drabble

I've had the good stuff, and I can see what the fuss is about. Complex flavors that take the taste of food up to a whole new level.

But what I want is the cheap red stuff I learned to love in college. A couple of bucks a bottle, companion of dorm pizza and heartbreaks.

Twent years later, I buy another bottle of Riunite Lambrusco, exemplar of my youth. I expect it to be vinegary, bitter--the kind of rotgut people are referring to when they sneer about cheap wine.

At the first sip I'm young again, learning about love and lust and the fear of a blank future. I lean back and savor the uncomplex sweetness.


Beverly - Jun 04, 2007 8:04:55 pm PDT #8955 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

dcp, are you sure it's the alcohol? My DH has red wine problems because of the nitrates--they trigger migraines.

We've found something local called, "Our Daily Red," which is young and must be drunk young because it has no preservatives. Sody pop for grownups.

Ooh, drabble:

Chianti, the rough, cheap stuff for pizza nights and spaghetti suppers, when three or four couples got together and pooled their meagre resources. The empty basket-wrapped bottle set on the red-checked kitchen tablecloth to hold candles scrounged from anywhere, different colors, all lending their molten substance to the multicolored volcano cascading in layers down the bottle's sides, till the bottle itself was completely hidden.

A masterpiece, seven years in the making and probably seven pounds in heft, slipped and fell to the sidewalk, shattered, colored wax flying apart like shrapnel, though the wax and the basket kept the bottle intact.

ETA: And where's my head? Yay, Jilli! And sorry about the wait. Can you think of it more as antici--pa.tion?