Nicole, spooky! Now I have the shivers.
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The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
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No shit that gave me shivers. Wow. Good one, Nicole! Good to see you back here, too.
Brrr. Genuinely spooky.
Nicely shivery, Nicole. Sly punch at the end.
Sail, yours was just very sad and angry.
Nice ones.
Thanks, again. I'm glad you guys liked it. I almost didn't post it. I let a friend read it before I posted - I was trying to see if it made sense to people that aren't inside my head - and his comment was something along the lines of, "Eh. It's ok."
So, phew!
Your friend probably doesn't like Flannery O'Connor or even The Sixth Sense, Nicole.
That was my thought, too. I like those little "gotcha" moments. Especially if they're spooky.
Great drabble, Nicole; the friend you asked to read it obviously has no taste.
God yes. With the lighting and everything in the photo, your drabble is absolutely fucking perfect. Gives me chills every time.
The site gather.com is having an American Idle-style writing contest, with the winner's manuscript getting published by Simon & Shuster: [link]