Elliot: I thought I said discreet. Gwen: What, do you see nipple?

'Just Rewards (2)'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


SailAweigh - Nov 27, 2006 7:40:48 am PST #8680 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Heh. That's a good one, connie. It makes me think of New Guinea, where 30 miles means 5 different languages in between, not a lot of marriages made when you can't talk to each other, much less get there for the terrain.

Sad to say, I just haven't been in the writing mood. When it will kick in again, nobody knows.


SailAweigh - Nov 30, 2006 5:23:50 pm PST #8681 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Meeting Point

Trace a circle with your finger, it appears never ending. Unbroken, the circle is complete, center and limits of its own universe, nowhere to go despite its infinite length. A tangent is a line that intersects that circle at just one point without breaking the circle. It exists simultaneously as part of the circle and apart from it. No matter the length of the line, there is just the one tangent.

Fortunately, my car wheels don’t care that there can only be one point in common with the road and they take me on endless tangents to anywhere I want to go.


Zenkitty - Dec 01, 2006 10:03:19 am PST #8682 of 10001
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.

Rockin', Sail. Love it!


SailAweigh - Dec 01, 2006 10:20:09 am PST #8683 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Thank you!


Lee - Dec 04, 2006 8:54:09 am PST #8684 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

Challenge #136 (circles) is now closed.

Challenge #137 is in the parking lot.


Amy - Dec 05, 2006 5:52:17 am PST #8685 of 10001
Because books.

In the Parking Lot

It was after hours on a Saturday evening, and the parking lot was empty. A blank canvas of blacktop, neatly divided by faded white lines. Dad had waited until it was perfect weather, nothing slick or slippery on the pavement to trip me up.

Nothing but our impatience, the trait that linked us more closely than even our features. None one ever mistook us for anything but father and daughter.

“No, don’t slam on the brakes. Honey.”

“I didn’t. Daddy.”

“You want to turn now. Now!

“I am! See?”

He did. He saw me driving away from him one day.


SailAweigh - Dec 05, 2006 5:53:15 am PST #8686 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Aw, man. I think you broke me.


Connie Neil - Dec 05, 2006 5:56:28 am PST #8687 of 10001
brillig

Parking lot driving lessons. I remember them well.


Amy - Dec 05, 2006 6:00:47 am PST #8688 of 10001
Because books.

Aw! No breaking! Sorry.

Driving lessons were the first thing that came to mind when I saw the topic. Good times. I love my dad, but he is an AWFUL teacher. As am I.


Deena - Dec 05, 2006 6:28:57 am PST #8689 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Young, broke, my new friends and I bonded quickly. I’d been a nice girl, and they loved teaching me their rituals. The late-arriving thus fervent convert, I smoked well, drank hard, and shared the good pot.

“Are you serious? Backward?”
“Fuckenay! Want to?”
“Okay, sure!”

He threw the truck in reverse and floored it. I screamed laughter as his old beater spun around the parking lot.

A couple days later I got up the nerve to approach him. “Wanna go do backwards donuts?”
“Are you crazy? That shit’ll get you killed!”
“You’re the one who taught me!”
“I was drunk!”