And don't you ever stand for that sort of thing. Someone ever tries to kill you, you try to kill 'em right back! ... You got the right same as anyone to live and try to kill people.

Mal ,'Our Mrs. Reynolds'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


erikaj - Nov 06, 2006 10:33:13 am PST #8662 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I try to be honest, every time.


Allyson - Nov 06, 2006 10:46:53 am PST #8663 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I have a gigantic voice, I'm told, and I will accept that wholeheartedly.


Jesse - Nov 06, 2006 10:53:33 am PST #8664 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

In my work writing, I'm very good at getting people's half-assed ideas to sound like Something Real.


Atropa - Nov 06, 2006 10:55:51 am PST #8665 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

Things I like about my writing? I have a very distinctive style. I'm good at atmosphere.


§ ita § - Nov 06, 2006 12:24:56 pm PST #8666 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

In business writing, I'm good at emotion--putting it in, but much more importantly, knowing when and how to take it out.

I'm also good at the Oxford comma.


Connie Neil - Nov 06, 2006 1:38:34 pm PST #8667 of 10001
brillig

Just as an exercise in taking a break from self-doubt, it'd be interesting to read what other people really like about their own writing.

I kick butt at creating distinctive minor characters. A great-grandma who adores rock and roll. The street-tough investigator who's also a Rhodes scholar. Real people have quirks. Some real people, though, don't have quirks, so not all the characters can have interesting twists.

I'm good at dialogue. I cheat, though, because I'm just taking dictation from the movie in my head, which is a great timesaver. I fortunately have a knack for showing individual speech patterns.

I can occasionally make myself cry at the emotion in a scene. Yes, I'm a sap, I fall for every competent tear jerking moment (though not so much with darling, big-eyed children, I tend to think more Stephen King than Hallmark when there's a helpless tot in a piece). That said, if it makes me sniffle, then I figure I've got a lock on at least half of my audience.

Thing is, though, I don't know if any of this sort of thing can be taught. I can't say how I do any of this, I just have the ability. Though I guess emotion on a page depends on how honest you're willing to be about dealing with emotion. To be able to depict an emotion, you have to admit you understand an emotion. I've run into writers who think it's too revealing to honestly depict lust or deep love or--most often--true, burning hatred and rage.

I read my old stuff frequently, and while I go, "Bad phrasing, I should switch those clauses," I often enough go, "That's pretty good, and I wrote that" to make me keep going.


Zenkitty - Nov 06, 2006 3:29:28 pm PST #8668 of 10001
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.

I'm good with dialog, and I'm good at starting things. I've learned a lot of writers don't know how or at what point to start the action.


Anne W. - Nov 06, 2006 4:11:07 pm PST #8669 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

I like to think that I'm good at finding the details that will vividly convey a lot about a character or a place in just a few words.


javachik - Nov 06, 2006 7:10:37 pm PST #8670 of 10001
Our wings are not tired.

I trust my audience enough to let them connect the dots. And like Anne, I try to convey much without too many words.


Beverly - Nov 07, 2006 5:54:11 am PST #8671 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Ooh. I like to think I'm good at dialog, because I rarely attribute a speech, and usually have Tom unpacking his suitcase.

"No." He returned the stack of folded undershirts to the open drawer, and then shut the drawer just a little too hard. "I didn't enjoy the trip."

"But why not?" she fiddled with the Hello Kitty figurines atop the bureau, aligning them in a rank to face him with blank, accusing faces. "Didn't you guys go out after your meetings all day?"

My real strength, though, is putting the reader in place. I write sensually, because that's the way my imagination works. I see/smell/hear/feel on my skin the scene in my head, and that's what goes into words. I'm good at it.

Unfortunately, once the reader and I are there, with all our spidey senses tingling, most often I don't have a story to tell. So, there you go.