I caught her on a park bench, making out with a *chaos* demon! Have you ever seen a chaos demon? They're all slime and antlers.

Spike ,'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


SailAweigh - Mar 26, 2005 7:49:27 pm PST #852 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Wow, deb. It's why such outrageous stories can be written, shit like that actually does happen.


deborah grabien - Mar 26, 2005 7:54:42 pm PST #853 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I mean, does that little newspaper item lack one single damned element for the ultimate noir soap opera? A dom - married, no less, a bank account a Chagall, four bullets execution style....

Just, wow. If I wrote that kind of book, I'd be salivating, at least once I stopped laughing.


SailAweigh - Mar 26, 2005 7:56:09 pm PST #854 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

once I stopped laughing

It begs Peter Sellers for the banker, or maybe, the husband. James Mason for the banker, if either of them were still around. And maybe a young Ursula Andress for the mistress/wife.


deborah grabien - Mar 26, 2005 8:47:39 pm PST #855 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

In dom gear...


Scrappy - Mar 27, 2005 7:05:52 am PST #856 of 10001
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.

What a great story. Thanks for posting it, Deb!


deborah grabien - Mar 27, 2005 7:32:39 am PST #857 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

A French financier, a dom named Cecile (good heavens), a Chagall...

I'm swooning. Damn, I wish I wrote that kind of mystery. Said it before, and I'll say it again, I couldn't come up with a plot like this one if I practiced for three weeks in a dark room first.


Anne W. - Mar 27, 2005 7:34:51 am PST #858 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

For some reason, it makes me very, very happy that these sort of things do happen in real life.


deborah grabien - Mar 27, 2005 7:56:13 am PST #859 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

For some reason, it makes me very, very happy that these sort of things do happen in real life.

giggling like a twelve-year-old, over here


erikaj - Mar 27, 2005 7:57:09 am PST #860 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Wow, I'd love to write a caper like that.. One story at a time, though. Everytime that cell door dings, another Leonard gets his wings.(although mixed with Le Carre or somebody) EL does say he gets inspired by stuff in the paper all the time.


Connie Neil - Mar 27, 2005 10:21:33 am PST #861 of 10001
brillig

For some reason, it makes me very, very happy that these sort of things do happen in real life.

it's reassuring in a chaotic, "the world has not gone under to oppression" sort of way.