River: They weren't cows inside. They were waiting to be, but they forgot. Now they see the sky and they remember what they are. Mal: Is it bad that what she said made perfect sense to me?

'Safe'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


juliana - Oct 10, 2006 12:30:26 pm PDT #8504 of 10001
I’d be lying if I didn’t say that I miss them all tonight…

My usual dinner - a cup of coffee and a piece of pie, with a square of cheesefood melted over the pie. The coffee tastes like the bottom of a tar pit, quintessential truck-stop coffee.

This is the other side of the American Dream, isn’t it? The endless road trip, criss-crossing the continent with the only constants being the greasy truck-stop food and the tired waitresses in their aprons and comfy shoes. The landscape varies, but the humans stay the same, with only their accents to tell you where you are.

I’m tired, but the road beckons, dragging me on.


sj - Oct 10, 2006 12:31:48 pm PDT #8505 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

These drabbles have all been very good.


Connie Neil - Oct 10, 2006 12:41:46 pm PDT #8506 of 10001
brillig

with only their accents to tell you where you are.

I love that line.


Pix - Oct 10, 2006 2:14:17 pm PDT #8507 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

Coffee and Pie

I worked at the diner for five years. Sometimes my whole life seemed like eggs and bacon, coffee and pie. One of the regulars came in every afternoon around 3. His face was weathered and his jeans grubby, but he always tipped well. The coffee was on the counter in front of his stool before he sat down: cream, no sugar. I knew how he liked it. He never said much, just sat at the counter and contemplated his mug. But we had an understanding, he and I. The stool, the coffee, the cream, the tip. A ritual we shared.


Pix - Oct 10, 2006 2:17:54 pm PDT #8508 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

Separate post to say I love your drabble, Juliana.

And yes, I'm lame and have not been drabbling in months, but I'm getting back in the game, damn it!


sarameg - Oct 10, 2006 2:23:32 pm PDT #8509 of 10001

This isn't very good, but for some reason is what popped to mind and won't go away

What I Told Them: "I know you were looking forward to blueberry pie, but I discovered too late I didn't have enough ingredients. I hope the crumble will do."

What Really Happened:

"Pie."
"Pie!"
"Pie!!PIE!PIE!!PIEPIEPIEPIEPIEPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIE!"

My toddler downed my cup of coffee before my brain could catch on. Pie for breakfast it was. Too early to be on the defensive.


P.M. Marc - Oct 10, 2006 2:39:36 pm PDT #8510 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

sarameg, that cracked me up.


Jesse - Oct 10, 2006 2:42:21 pm PDT #8511 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

Just representing a different kind of pie...

My grandmother stands at the stove, slowly cooking the ground pork, adding a mashed potato, some onion, and the spices. She’s making tourtiere, French Canadian pork pie. The recipe she gave me calls for half-teaspoons of cinnamon and cloves, but that’s not nearly enough to get the flavor right. While it’s cooking, she makes the pie crust. After seventy years of baking, she’s got the touch, even though she can’t see well enough to read the recipe any more, and the crust is always perfect. Dinner is the tourtiere with ketchup, a salad, a cup of coffee for my Memere.


SailAweigh - Oct 10, 2006 3:15:09 pm PDT #8512 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Kristin, there's no "getting back in the game"; you never left it. This has been a fun topic to drabble and to follow along with others.


Daisy Jane - Oct 10, 2006 3:19:49 pm PDT #8513 of 10001
"This bar smells like kerosene and stripper tears."

I think I have an idea for this one finally. Pie and coffee conjures Twin Peaks for me too, and it's hard to get off the brain.

Love everyone's so far!