Yep. The question of obliqueness becomes the limit on ithe piece's accessibility to the reader.
Aw jeez, I sound like a frickin' writing instructor, or something.
I swear, I am NOT trying to sound pompous....
Well, if we followed the recipe...should be cake. A demon-violence-free-zone cake.
Lorne ,'Why We Fight'
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
deborah grabien - Oct 01, 2006 5:29:56 pm PDT #8432 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Daisy Jane - Oct 01, 2006 5:52:58 pm PDT #8433 of 10001
"This bar smells like kerosene and stripper tears."
No, I appreciate it. And edited back up top to be more explicit.
deborah grabien - Oct 01, 2006 6:13:43 pm PDT #8434 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Oh, hell yes. Waaaaaay more of a doorway into that, and way less timid. A lot of the obscuring film is off.
Typo:
forked-tounged
Please to fix.
Daisy Jane - Oct 01, 2006 6:21:24 pm PDT #8435 of 10001
"This bar smells like kerosene and stripper tears."
Thank you ma'am.
erikaj - Oct 01, 2006 6:35:29 pm PDT #8436 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
Aw, shucks. Cause I just finished an episode of The Wire, which I love deeply for something that tells me I can't write for shit every week. "Hey, rookie. Gimme quarter."
Daisy Jane - Oct 01, 2006 6:42:46 pm PDT #8437 of 10001
"This bar smells like kerosene and stripper tears."
which I love deeply for something that tells me I can't write for shit every week.
Again. Devoured the thread in a week. I beg to differ, and I have proof.
Lee - Oct 01, 2006 7:42:54 pm PDT #8438 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
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P.M. Marc - Oct 01, 2006 7:43:51 pm PDT #8439 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Cosine
Daisy Jane - Oct 01, 2006 7:47:48 pm PDT #8440 of 10001
"This bar smells like kerosene and stripper tears."
deb's gonna kill you.
P.M. Marc - Oct 01, 2006 8:05:35 pm PDT #8441 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
But it's a *pretty* word!