Young Simon: So... how'd the Independents cut us off? Young River: They were using dinosaurs.

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The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Aug 31, 2006 9:35:04 am PDT #8225 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Um - Allyson? Jilli?

Voice of experience here: if it was dreadful, you'd have already heard.

Even during publishing's summer schedule, you'd have already heard.

Really. Not saying you won't maybe get back a list of "this needs fixing or changing or adding or explaining" stuff, but that's what you're both waiting for, right?

Not dreadful.

Chill, please.


Atropa - Aug 31, 2006 9:37:33 am PDT #8226 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

Voice of experience here: if it was dreadful, you'd have already heard.

Really? I'm going to cling to your post in a very needy and pathetic way, because I have no perspective on this right now.


Allyson - Aug 31, 2006 9:42:51 am PDT #8227 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Chill, please.

Not gonna happen until the notes are in my wee fists of paranoia. Seriously. I think because I'm in a place now where I cant bear to read what I've written without cringing and wanting to rewrite so badly.


ChiKat - Aug 31, 2006 9:43:02 am PDT #8228 of 10001
That man was going to shank me. Over an omelette. Two eggs and a slice of government cheese. Is that what my life is worth?

Okay, here's what I've got:

Good writing fulfills its purpose with clarity, vivid detail and self-expression. That purpose can be anything from teaching someone how to use a software package to analyzing literary text to exploring the dynamics of interpersonal relationships.

Good writing uses language like a paint brush, evoking images and feelings that are clear and impact the reader. It hits a true emotional place that weak writing just can’t seem to reach.

There is a rhythm and meter to good writing much like there is a good beat in music. Good writing sounds like music when read aloud. It can be melodic or a staccato drum beat, but it’s still musical.

Good writing is compelling. It entices the reader and leaves them hungry for more. Characters are like ghosts who cling to your memories and won’t let go. Finishing a good book is like saying good-bye to a dear friend.


P.M. Marc - Aug 31, 2006 10:02:06 am PDT #8229 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

When you know your writing is good, why is it?

When, on re-read after gaining distance, I despair of ever writing something that good again.


erikaj - Aug 31, 2006 11:29:48 am PDT #8230 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Yeah, y'all, No is short. I've heard it enough.


Allyson - Aug 31, 2006 11:45:47 am PDT #8231 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Maybe we need to a Neurotic Buffista Writer subthread.


Aims - Aug 31, 2006 11:46:38 am PDT #8232 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

I thought that was Minearverse?


Atropa - Aug 31, 2006 12:16:16 pm PDT #8233 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

Maybe we need to a Neurotic Buffista Writer subthread.

nods


erikaj - Aug 31, 2006 12:17:23 pm PDT #8234 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

every thread is the neurotic writer thread...oh, that's just me.