Fred: So you don't worry that it's possible for someone to send out a biological or electronic trigger that effectively overrides your own sense of ideals and values and replaces them with an alternative coercive agenda that reduces you to a mindless meat puppet? Shopkeeper: Wow. People used to think that I was paranoid.

'Time Bomb'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

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sarameg - Aug 30, 2006 4:30:23 pm PDT #8205 of 10001

On her deathbed, she gave her diamond and platinum ring to Gladys, her neighbor and daughter in her heart.

After my parents had gone through the house, donating most, they came back with only a small box of ends and odds. Inside was a ring we'd given her: reflective hematite clasped in silver, subtly southwestern. You can still see the slight weld where it was sized to fit her finger.

I claimed it. First, on my middle finger, now on the ring.

I didn't always like her. I only really knew her after she was dead. I am more a descendant of the southwest than of Sweden. But I've worn a reminder of my grandmother, and of my home, for a decade now. It's a part of me.


Lee - Aug 30, 2006 5:06:36 pm PDT #8206 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

Nice one, Sarameg.


§ ita § - Aug 30, 2006 5:13:09 pm PDT #8207 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

That one is nice, sarameg. Though do you mean descendant instead of ancestor in the antepenultimate sentence?


deborah grabien - Aug 30, 2006 6:54:23 pm PDT #8208 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

AmyLiz, you can't go wrong with chick. They still use it. Also bird.

And, well, dolly-bird.


Beverly - Aug 30, 2006 7:51:48 pm PDT #8209 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

'Suela, does the magazine have a letters column? Because that succinctly and politely worded post would make a splendid contribution to it.

Very nice, sarameg.


sarameg - Aug 31, 2006 4:45:10 am PDT #8210 of 10001

Though do you mean descendant instead of ancestor in the antepenultimate sentence?

YES. That word just blipped from my head last night (plus when I was wee, I used to always swap them. Habits die hard. ) Hate it when that happens. Thank you.


deborah grabien - Aug 31, 2006 7:16:13 am PDT #8211 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Nice way to wake up:

From Publishers Weekly

In Grabien's mesmerizing fourth mystery of ghostly suspense (after 2005's Matty Groves), actress Penny Wintercraft-Hawkes gets a call from her long-absent brother, Stephen, who has returned to London from Hong Kong with his wife, Tamsin, to claim land he inherited on the Isle of Dogs, situated on the Thames. Stephen wants Penny's lover, Ringan Laine, a folk musician and expert in period restoration, to consult on his plan to build a Tudor-style manor house on the site. Ringan's uneasy first steps on the isle are only the prelude to the horror of visions to come. A girl who drowns her sister, a pack of baying dogs and a musician from Henry VIII's court invade Ringan's dreams and his waking life. As in previous entries to the series, one of Ringan's folksongs figures into the story and enhances the drama. Grabien's skillful blend of reality and the supernatural will chill even skeptical readers. (Oct.)

I'll take it.


Kalshane - Aug 31, 2006 7:39:36 am PDT #8212 of 10001
GS: If you had to choose between kicking evil in the head or the behind, which would you choose, and why? Minsc: I'm not sure I understand the question. I have two feet, do I not? You do not take a small plate when the feast of evil welcomes seconds.

Yay, Deb.

Turned out that they didn't accept any stories. The writers submitting had all failed to include one particular element in their stories--an element that the call for submissions had never mentioned.

Contrary to acknowledging this, the editor of the magazine merely snarked that the SF community "couldn't rise to the challenge", and published only the novella by the fiction editor of the issue.

Oy. That sucks and bites, Suela.


deborah grabien - Aug 31, 2006 7:56:39 am PDT #8213 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

BTW. 'suela, I'm with Bev. If there's a letters column, that post is right on the money about their screwup. And they're wasting writers' time, which is never a good thing.


sumi - Aug 31, 2006 8:02:05 am PDT #8214 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

'suela - that's completely ridiculous! They need to be called on that.