...burning baby fish swimming all round your head.

Drusilla ,'Conversations with Dead People'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Deena - Aug 28, 2006 6:42:44 am PDT #8145 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Nice one Lee. Someday, if you're very good, and eat all your wheaties, you'll be as good at this as Steph was.

Seriously, thanks to both of you. Even when I haven't had anything to say I've enjoyed the stuff everyone else has come up with and, Steph, you've come up with some amazing prompts. It's pretty awesome that your ideas have helped to keep the thread going so successfully. (I'm not sure that sounds the way I mean it to.)

Jewelry

On my left ring finger rests a slim band decorated with roses and leaves lightly carven in Black Hills gold. Around my neck, a goldstone dangles from a thin chain; matching earrings glint from my ears. Another necklace, a mustard seed floating in a bauble hangs from a shorter chain above. A ring from Israel slips around my right pinky finger.

I believe I will always cherish the wedding ring I’m pretty sure sits on my bedside table, but the others—from mother, father and sister—live on beautifully only in my mind, like my relationship with the givers.


§ ita § - Aug 28, 2006 7:32:22 am PDT #8146 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

There's nothing that says that the "you're" can't be another person.

And there's always fiction.


Beverly - Aug 28, 2006 8:06:08 am PDT #8147 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

I bought it off ebay on a whim, and it came yesterday: a disc of un-hallmarked silver, its outward surface cast, with the correct detail of an anatomical drawing, in the image of a snail. Carefully represented blades of grass surround the animal, bending at its passage. Arcing around the circumference of the disc in the clear space above the snail is the word, ADAGIO.

My car used to bear a similar image, belying the obvious, meaning "S-car GO!" Now this medallion, hung from a simple chain to fall between my breasts, signifies the caught-in-amber feeling my life has, lately.


erikaj - Aug 28, 2006 8:40:16 am PDT #8148 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I think I'm really proud of this one, just by accident. And it's regulation length, ditto.
I’ve always worn rings on both my ring fingers, although when I got the second ring at eighteen, there was a moment of coy, girlish hesitation about whether I should consider the one on my left hand prime real estate, my Camelback Mountain, Inner Harbor, Nob Hill...For Husband’s Two Months’ Salary only. Until that moment, deciding which semi-precious stone to take off and consign to resizing or my jewelry box, I hadn’t considered that I had a groom slipping a band on my finger as even the remotest thought. But once I thought that, my hand looked different. “Wear them both,” my mother said. “Life’s too short.”


deborah grabien - Aug 28, 2006 2:38:44 pm PDT #8149 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

And there's always fiction.

Not with a statement like "the jewelry you're wearing". I mean, I am or I'm not. And I'm not and don't.

I could write about NOT wearing jewelry. That would be accurate.


Topic!Cindy - Aug 28, 2006 2:43:06 pm PDT #8150 of 10001
What is even happening?

Sure it could be fiction. The you doesn't have to refer to the writer. The you could be fictional. The jewelry could be fictional. It doesn't have to be real or accurate. I mean, I understand anyone choosing not take it as fictional, but there's no reason it couldn't be fiction, regardless of why you wouldn't write it.


Steph L. - Aug 28, 2006 2:45:56 pm PDT #8151 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Right -- you could (for instance, and I'm actually desperately hoping you *will*) write from the POV of Mr. T.


deborah grabien - Aug 28, 2006 2:55:49 pm PDT #8152 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Nah. I'm-a kick back and enjoy everyone else's right now.


Steph L. - Aug 28, 2006 2:56:42 pm PDT #8153 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

I pity the fool who doesn't write a Mr. T drabble!

....okay, that doesn't sound convincing. Not even when I hear Mr. T (in my head) saying it.

Dang.


Atropa - Aug 28, 2006 2:58:23 pm PDT #8154 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

Well, this is fiction. But not a Mr. T drabble. Sorry, Tep.

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I'm sure you put a lot of thought into your outfit. The lacy top, the skirt short enough to show your stockings, the clearance-rack corset with frayed seams. (Don't worry; the flaws didn't show in the dim club light.) But you could have been wearing baggy jeans and a t-shirt, and I would have picked you. Not because you were especially beautiful, sorry. Because you were wearing one of those ridiculous "blood vial" necklaces. A tiny glass bottle on a chain that signaled what your fantasy was. And later, when you're cold and still and paler than even your carefully-applied makeup, the sting of the red-dyed alcohol is as familiar to me as an after-dinner mint would have been to you.