My love for me now / Ain't hard to explain / The Hero of Canton / The man they call...ME.

Jayne ,'Jaynestown'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


erikaj - Aug 14, 2006 3:45:25 pm PDT #8066 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Ok, Deb. I'm not writing very much right now...I've got time.


deborah grabien - Aug 14, 2006 3:46:04 pm PDT #8067 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Sending.


erikaj - Aug 14, 2006 3:49:25 pm PDT #8068 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

A'ight. Yeah, I think I'm funny.


deborah grabien - Aug 14, 2006 3:57:21 pm PDT #8069 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I actually use the damned word in there, several times, but without the apostrophe....

Anyway, you have it, and quick feedback, she is my friend.


Gus - Aug 14, 2006 5:52:49 pm PDT #8070 of 10001
Bag the crypto. Say what is on your mind.

DG: I sent you the thing. You don't like my reads, but if you want one from a crusty old cranky fucker, I have got one for 7W.


Steph L. - Aug 14, 2006 6:10:32 pm PDT #8071 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

New drabble topic!

Challenge #119 (advertising) is now closed.

Challenge #120 is foreign languages.

As always, if you have any suggestions for future drabble topics, please let me know!


Gus - Aug 14, 2006 6:39:59 pm PDT #8072 of 10001
Bag the crypto. Say what is on your mind.

Challenge #120 is foreign languages.

She spoke to me. There were sounds. I could only watch her lips.

Her teeth appeared, and disappeared, nipping down on a consonant. The letter 'L' made her philtrum twist in a way that was ... unbearable. The letter 'K' brought the lines of her neck into a perfect symmetry.

She wet her lips at the end of a sentence. Drew a breath, drilled her eyes into mine.

Smiled.

Continued.

I lost all audio. She hooked a stray hair behind her ear.

She could have been asking a question. All I could see was her hand, her hair, her ear.

Her lips.


deborah grabien - Aug 14, 2006 6:44:28 pm PDT #8073 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Gus, MAJORLY cool drabble.

But the synopsis hasn't got to my email yet.


Gus - Aug 14, 2006 6:56:14 pm PDT #8074 of 10001
Bag the crypto. Say what is on your mind.

Yup. It is sitting in my "returned" box, 'cuz I fat-fingered the address. Here she goes...


deborah grabien - Aug 14, 2006 10:47:15 pm PDT #8075 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Nope. No luck, Gus - still not in my email box, and it isn't in my spam filter folder, either. It just isn't here, period.