Lorne: Once the word spreads you beat up an innocent old man, well, the truly terrible will think twice before going toe-to-toe with our Avenging Angel. Spike: Yes. The geriatric community will be soiling their nappies when they hear you're on the case. Bravo.

'The Cautionary Tale of Numero Cinco'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Jul 06, 2006 11:47:37 am PDT #7737 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Yep. And in point of fact, I'd suggest changing that last bit to lose then "then" entirely. Something like:

Goths don’t all think they’re vampires, they’re not all depressed and suicidal, and if Goths are in a cult? So is every single fan of an organized sport.

ION, I just got off the three-way conference with Daymond and Kate. And I believe it's safe, at this point, to say

Let. the. games. muthafuckin'. BEGIN!


Atropa - Jul 06, 2006 11:49:37 am PDT #7738 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

Deb, that's wonderful news!


Ginger - Jul 06, 2006 11:51:31 am PDT #7739 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Semicolon after vampires and suicidal, since each of those phrases could be sentence on its own.

I have never seen any writing from Allyson or Jilli that was less than wonderful. You've done a huge amount of research on your book, Typo Boy, and I'm sure everything's fine. It's great you're getting so much interest so soon.

I, however, suck.


Beverly - Jul 06, 2006 11:55:17 am PDT #7740 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Do not.

Also, Woo! to Deb. Courage to Jilli. Fortitude to Gar. The Wizard can give me the brain.


Topic!Cindy - Jul 06, 2006 11:56:26 am PDT #7741 of 10001
What is even happening?

I, however, suck.

Only when you post things like the above quoted thing.


Ginger - Jul 06, 2006 11:57:48 am PDT #7742 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Can I have the brain? Pretty please.


Pix - Jul 06, 2006 11:58:33 am PDT #7743 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

But I want the brain!

Can we share, Ginger?


Topic!Cindy - Jul 06, 2006 11:58:59 am PDT #7744 of 10001
What is even happening?

It's kind of...gooey, and I *don't* think that's spinal fluid.


Ginger - Jul 06, 2006 11:59:24 am PDT #7745 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

The way I feel right now, a third of a brain would be better than none.


Pix - Jul 06, 2006 11:59:49 am PDT #7746 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

I hear ya, sister. I'm in the same boat.