Wash: Don't fall asleep now. Sleepiness is weakness of character. Ask anyone. You're acting captain. Know what happens you fall asleep now? Zoe: Jayne slits my throat, and takes over. Wash: That's right. Zoe: And we can't stop it.

'Shindig'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


SailAweigh - Jun 26, 2006 4:45:10 pm PDT #7443 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Can't be the same one -- the first book doesn't come out till December. But a lot of the "vampire" and "demon" books out there are, at least in romance, are very similar. In a very sad way.

Then it is sad. Very, very sad. Because it's one thing to copy a good idea, but to copy a bad one? Ugh.


Typo Boy - Jun 26, 2006 5:16:17 pm PDT #7444 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

One of my queries got a request for a proposal - about an hour after it was sent. That is good right? [Of course I know it is good. I guess what I mean is how much should I get my hopes up? What have my odds just gone up to?]

OK how closely do I parse the reply? The editor asks for "a sample chapter" singular along with the proposal. My proposal has three sample chapters. Include all three? Or pick one?


Allyson - Jun 26, 2006 6:54:42 pm PDT #7445 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Pick one. Editors must be handled with the care one would handle an explosive device. Until they're your editor. YEMV.


Typo Boy - Jun 26, 2006 7:08:56 pm PDT #7446 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Thanks. Done and done.


deborah grabien - Jun 26, 2006 11:55:35 pm PDT #7447 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

connie, the conference call with Daymond and both our agents is set for Thursday morning. Let the muthafuckin' games begin. I am writing this book and it will be huge, in every sense. Not only that, true to Daymond's initial vision.

Went to see Bela Fleck and the Flecktones tonight in Santa Rosa. He now has FFoSM and Matty Groves, dedicated, and I have his email address. I'm-a ask for a Kinkaids blurb.

Gettin' it on, yo.


deborah grabien - Jun 27, 2006 7:42:39 am PDT #7448 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Janet

She wasn't obsessed with his stardom. She was obsessed with the man, Bobby himself.

Remember that mysterious shooting? She snuck into Marin General to taunt his wife: he doesn't want you he wants me hahahahaha otherwise he wouldn't have shot you.

She knew where Bobby lived. She'd camp out, waiting, watching for him.

One morning, he came out and found her sorting through his trash: empty milk cartons, wrappers, used tissues, in tidy piles.

When the cops showed up, she had a broken guitar string coiled up in her pocket, and she was grinning. Today, we've named her type: stalker.


Typo Boy - Jun 27, 2006 7:50:07 am PDT #7449 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Remember that mysterious shooting? She snuck into Marin General to taunt his wife: he doesn't want you he wants me hahahahaha otherwise he wouldn't have shot you.

This paragraph does not fit the rhythm of the rest in my opinion. Otherwise sad and scary.


Steph L. - Jun 27, 2006 7:54:43 am PDT #7450 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Deb, I can't it -- your drabble makes me think of the song "Bobby's Girl."

Because I am a dork.


Topic!Cindy - Jun 27, 2006 7:57:01 am PDT #7451 of 10001
What is even happening?

I know every word to that song. You are not alone.


Topic!Cindy - Jun 27, 2006 7:58:08 am PDT #7452 of 10001
What is even happening?

Deb's drabble would could make a creeptastic scene. In my head, Minear would direct it, and would have Bobby's Girl playing in the background, on a tinny sounding transistor radio.