No. And yes. It's always sudden.

Tara ,'Storyteller'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


JZ - Jun 12, 2006 10:43:46 am PDT #7106 of 10001
See? I gave everybody here an opportunity to tell me what a bad person I am and nobody did, because I fuckin' rule.

Erin, my mom, who writes plays and short fiction, has done very specific drabbles for her characters: when a character feels vague or lost, she'll:

  • Re-read what she's already written, skimming for something character-specific that leaps out at her -- just a phrase, a thought, a look will do; then

  • With that in mind, do an Imaginary Look At Me drabble (very very loose, sometimes a paragraph and sometimes just little scribbly notes), describing an imaginary snapshot of that character in some significant life moment. Doesn't have to be anything that occurs within the story timeline, and for my mom it sometimes helps if it isn't. Anything significant: first day of school, prom picture, posing with mom at a bridal shower, sitting on a steamer trunk about to sail off on honeymoon, posing with his CO in uniform for the folks back home. Then she jots down notes on the character's clothes, the look on her/his face, who was holding the camera and how the character felt about the photographer and the moment and the other people in the picture, how the rest of the day turned out.

Sometimes she'll get stuck and have to do a second drabble, but usually just the one will pull the character back into focus, and often she'll get a flash of insight she wasn't expecting.


Strix - Jun 12, 2006 11:17:15 am PDT #7107 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Oh, these are excellent ideas!

I just spent an hour changing my writing environment. I had moved my computer to the bedroom for the summer cause, AC...but I got another window unit for the kitchen, so the sun room should stay much cooler.

Sitting on my bed and writing was great for a while, but it's hell on my back, and I don't like hearing beeping and pinging in my sleep if I leave the comp on. Although, I did like the ability to just drop whatever I was reading and lunge at the keyboard if a sudden urge to write grabbed me. I'm trying to pay attention to those urges and obey them more.

I think I will leave the MSS alone today, and work on drabbles and interviews and research, and just try to concentrate on who my characters are and what the situation is that's surrounding them, rather than driving them through the pages just to get a certain number or words per day.

Damn, this is hard. But it's fun!


erikaj - Jun 12, 2006 11:31:19 am PDT #7108 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

What should I say in my bio statement? Just thinking of it makes me feel boring. I know my email's one bit, though it's been years since anyone's actually done that.


Scrappy - Jun 12, 2006 11:39:50 am PDT #7109 of 10001
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.

Where you live, where you went to school, anything else published. Also, depending on the place the bio is for, you could add some of your interests--I might put politics and The three Daves (explain who they are and what they do).


erikaj - Jun 12, 2006 12:00:45 pm PDT #7110 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

OK, something like:
Erika is a liberal wheelchair user who is hoping the previous story can be used for party chat when she is a famous novelist or to pass the time when she is washing writers' coffee cups at HBO. She is addicted to feedback and can be reached at(my e-mail)


Steph L. - Jun 12, 2006 12:03:02 pm PDT #7111 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Monday means new drabble topic!

Challenge #112 (poetry) is now closed.

Challenge #113 is hunger.


Amy - Jun 12, 2006 12:03:48 pm PDT #7112 of 10001
Because books.

Erika is a liberal wheelchair user who is hoping the previous story can be used for party chat when she is a famous novelist or to pass the time when she is washing writers' coffee cups at HBO. She is addicted to feedback and can be reached at(my e-mail)

I love that! Perfect.


Topic!Cindy - Jun 12, 2006 12:53:12 pm PDT #7113 of 10001
What is even happening?

I read that as if it meant you used your wheelchair liberally, but that cracked me up, so I say keep it. I think it reads great!


erikaj - Jun 12, 2006 12:56:06 pm PDT #7114 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

It kind of does tilt toward the left, actually.


erikaj - Jun 12, 2006 12:59:51 pm PDT #7115 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Erika is a wheelchair user, novelist and crime-fiction fangirl who lives in Phoenix, but has left her heart in San Francisco and her spleen in Baltimore.She hopes for creative success or the chance to wash out the coffee cups in the writers’ room at HBO. Other goals include celebrating the election of a Senator for whom she voted, world peace, and the chance to direct.Feedback is her strongest addiction. Feed the craving at (my alternate e-mail)