I've been out of the abbey two days, I've beaten a lawman senseless, I've fallen in with criminals. I watched the captain shoot the man I swore to protect. And I'm not even sure if I think he was wrong.

Book ,'Serenity'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

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Dana - Jun 02, 2006 10:23:30 am PDT #6917 of 10001
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.

Signs cluster excitedly on street corners, planted like implausible flowers next to non-functioning stoplights: "Trash Removal!" "We Restore Old Photo's!" "50 Signs for $50!" It looks like Election Day, but instead of choosing your representative, you're electing people to help rebuild your life.

Nestled among the advertisements for contractors and demolition specialists are hand-lettered signs, like roses amid the dandelions. Supermarkets, family restaurants, bars, all announcing some variation of the same phrase.

We are open. We are here. This city is our home. Come to us and be fed. Break bread with your neighbors. Rejoice that you're alive and hungry.

(100 words)


lisah - Jun 02, 2006 10:26:19 am PDT #6918 of 10001
Punishingly Intricate

oh Dana. that is beautiful


Amy - Jun 02, 2006 10:28:39 am PDT #6919 of 10001
Because books.

We are open. We are here. This city is our home. Come to us and be fed. Break bread with your neighbors. Rejoice that you're alive and hungry.

This broke me a little. Wonderful drabble, Dana.


Typo Boy - Jun 02, 2006 10:29:38 am PDT #6920 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

What Lisah and AmyLiz said.


deborah grabien - Jun 02, 2006 10:31:10 am PDT #6921 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

DAMN, Dana. Way to put your money where your mouth is. And now I want enough beignets to induce a sugar coma.


SailAweigh - Jun 02, 2006 11:27:59 am PDT #6922 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Mmmm, beignets. Damn fine drabble, Dana.


Liese S. - Jun 02, 2006 12:21:32 pm PDT #6923 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Oh, wow, Dana.


Dana - Jun 02, 2006 12:23:29 pm PDT #6924 of 10001
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.

Thanks, guys.

And I have to say that the "Photo's" is genuine, and that the misplaced apostrophe made me cringe every time I saw it.


deborah grabien - Jun 02, 2006 12:30:03 pm PDT #6925 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

This is a very weird day for book stuff.

1. Jonathan Karp passed on the Kinkaids. BAD.

2. The editor of the Seal anthology of women writers writing about illness, age, and how their bodies' frailties affect their work cut about a third of the writers from the list. The editor was apparently "fierce" that "I want Grabien's essay in here". GOOD.

3. My editor SMP - well. Check it out for yourselves. Murder at the Flatiron is written by Ruth Cavin, the imprints EIC and my personal editor for Haunted Ballads. Good, I think?


Typo Boy - Jun 02, 2006 12:58:48 pm PDT #6926 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Can you pitch the Kinkaids elsewhere? I loved the ending of one you did.