Riley: Oh, yeah. Sorry 'bout last time. Heard I missed out on some fun. Xander: Oh yeah, fun was had. Also frolic, merriment and near-death hijinks.

'Never Leave Me'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Typo Boy - May 29, 2006 7:53:01 am PDT #6832 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

The part that drove nuts was the marketing Analysis and promotion plan. Also the biography cause my biography does not show expertise in the subject I'm writing about. I finally got around that by -A) Explaining what does qualify me even though it does not fit in a sound Byte. B) Getting some blurbs from some people I can prove know what they are doing.

The thing I have that you don't is the comparative analysis - cause it definitely belongs a category and I had to explain how it differs from similar stuff, and what it has to offer that they don't.

I have one last self-edit to do, and then I'll be ready for feedback. Any chance someone would have time for me to shoot a proposal their way on Tuesday Evening or Wed? Just to spot anything that might alienate an editor or publisher.


Allyson - May 29, 2006 8:04:24 am PDT #6833 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I'm no expert, Typo Boy, but I'd be happy to take a look. Profile addie when you're ready.


Typo Boy - May 29, 2006 8:12:40 am PDT #6834 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Allyson thanks so much. That will be great.


Strix - May 29, 2006 8:48:47 am PDT #6835 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Sail, new chapters insent.


SailAweigh - May 29, 2006 8:55:56 am PDT #6836 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Oooh, goody!


SailAweigh - May 29, 2006 9:44:41 am PDT #6837 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Backflung, Erin.

BTW, in case I wasn't strong enough in my e-mail. You are evil.


Strix - May 29, 2006 10:26:23 am PDT #6838 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Me? Never, darling.....

Ugh. I wrote all morning in an absolute allergy FUG, so any bizarre erros please chalk up to the fact that I was a giant snot and sneezing machine.

Sexy, huh?


Steph L. - May 29, 2006 10:30:46 am PDT #6839 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

I am SO sorry I missed last week's drabble topic. I was in SF on Monday, and was all possessed by The Ick when I got back, and the drabble topic totally slipped my mind. Bad Teppy. No cookie.

Challenge #110 (in the garden) is now closed.

Challenge #111 is comfort food. (Which I am now going to go make, and then take my still-sick self to bed.)


SailAweigh - May 29, 2006 10:40:26 am PDT #6840 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Oh, definitely sexaaaay. I'm looking forward to more like the Tess/Trevor scene. ::fans face:: Hawt.


erikaj - May 29, 2006 11:53:10 am PDT #6841 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Consolation Tasty-Kake

It’s that time of year where fannish hearts grow light and the leather pants come out of the closet. But not for us...the brokeass white girls. Dag. I’m dragging my own personal ghetto around and cursing the Man in terms that would make a street-corner philosopher proud when it comes.

“ You’ve got a package.”

Despite it being from Baltimore, it is not that kind of package.(That would take care of the boredom thing and the poor thing in one big shot were it not for the risk-of-prison thing and neither of us is especially sure we can jail. We are citizens down to our bones. Damn it.)

“What real people do you know in Baltimore?” Mom says, as always surprised by my online posse’s breadth.

“Oh, there are Balmeristas.”

We ponder again why I’m the only Buffista from my desert clime. “I just don’t understand that.”

Local Buffy fans embarrass me or I would invite someone. But they’re just too...Trekkish or something. Too eager to whip out the fangs and paint their bare chests...gak. I can feel superior for about twenty seconds before I say “This process works because our brains are deductive instruments and theirs are day-old banana pudding.” Ok, they’re not my kind of geek, is the truth of it.

My mother gives me The Baltimore Face...the one that says “I’ll believe this is cool if you say so, but it makes no sense at all.”(She’s getting some practice as the obsession grows with my “Wire” watching, but she knows cookies are good things. Cookies and a box of Tasty-Kake.)

“They’re on Homicide. A few times.”

“Oh.” I quote Homicide like her creepy cousin quotes the Book of Mormon. She knows that’s all there is to say.

But it was the next best thing to Bodymore, and being left on a dark street corner with people I love. My crew sent me a shout-out.