Mal: Then I call it a win. What's the problem? Inara: Should I start with the part where you're stranded in the middle of nowhere, or the part where you have no clothes?

'Trash'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Mar 16, 2005 11:17:18 am PST #635 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Deb will gladly look at Jilli's design specs if it takes Deb's mind off how much she wants to run amok in the senate with her crossbow right now.


Pix - Mar 16, 2005 11:18:32 am PST #636 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

Deb, I'm planning on reading the manuscript this weekend--is that going to be too late?


deborah grabien - Mar 16, 2005 11:19:55 am PST #637 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Kristin, nope, not too late at all.


Amy - Mar 16, 2005 11:49:47 am PST #638 of 10001
Because books.

Photo 9

The matching collar and bag made the decision for me. Any girl who took the trouble to trick herself out like that played by the rules. She’d be polite, maybe a bit cautious, but she wouldn’t want to make a scene. She wouldn’t want to seem ungrateful. It wouldn’t be nice.

It was almost too easy, when I picked up a ticket receipt and asked if it was hers. She smiled, edging her glasses back up her nose, and I could see it all in that moment—the bar just outside the station, the alley beyond that. My car.

The end.


Betsy HP - Mar 16, 2005 11:56:09 am PST #639 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

Brrrrr.


Connie Neil - Mar 16, 2005 12:01:53 pm PST #640 of 10001
brillig

I can't think of anything for the other pictures. Anything that's not already been done. It's very frustrating.


Liese S. - Mar 16, 2005 12:19:36 pm PST #641 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

for posterity

#3

Everyone knew eventually one of them would fill Annette's shoes.

Barb had insisted on the bash. "It's your responsibility, Hugh." What else did they have to do? One could only take so many tropical vacations.

Gloria pressed the camera into my palms. "Go on, dear, just snap a few. For posterity, you know." Her laughter rippled like her dresses.

Later they'd blame the alcohol. Barb's voice dropped when she was angry; Gloria's became shrill.

But when they had all gone, I cleared the glasses, emptied the ashtrays, tucked the children into bed.

Hugh was still sitting there. "Anita." I went to him. I always did.


Liese S. - Mar 16, 2005 12:23:03 pm PST #642 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Huh. What did I do with my link? Oh, left a space, huh?

Also, couldn't trim those last 10 words. Couldn't figure out what to do.


Atropa - Mar 16, 2005 1:09:18 pm PST #643 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

I've given up on the 100-word limit. But, I'm trying to make the drabbles as short as possible.

Photo #5

The Donna Messinger-Tofferdept "Little Girl Lost" mystery lingers to this day. In 1973, a young girl in a flannel nightgown was found crying in a Woolworth's toy department in Anaconda, Montana. No one in the town recognized her. Stating her name was Donna Messinger and that she was from Chicago, every attempt was made to reunite her with her family. However, not only was the Messinger family unable to be located, but the home address Donna gave was a deserted lot between two apartment buildings. After a blaze of publicity, she was identified as Donna Tofferdept, who had gone missing two years earlier from her family home in Worland-Ten-Step, Wyoming. Donna did not recognize the Tofferdepts, and insisted that her real family were the ones pictured in the photo that was clutched in her hand when she was originally found. While the photo did indeed show Donna, no one knew who the other three people were. Unable to accept the Tofferdepts as her family, Donna ran away from home when she was 14. She left a note saying that she had seen her brother, Butch, in a car going down the highway, and that she was determined to re-join her real family. The Tofferdepts, having no other children and blaming each other for Donna's refusal to believe she was their daughter, divorced three years later.


SailAweigh - Mar 16, 2005 1:25:53 pm PST #644 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Damn, Jilli. That last one was the creepiest for being the closest to "normal."

Photo #2.

Days of Wine and Roses

The summer that Nancy got married was the last time we went out on the river. Tucked under our skirts, we’d hidden two glasses and a bottle of father’s port. The bottle swung against my leg as we hauled the boat out to the breakwater. The pilfered wine would taste good as we let the boat drift along the riverbank, we thought.

It was a good trip. The pull of the oars and the breeze in our faces gave us a sense of movement that we knew would be over with Nancy’s marriage. Afterward: no mobility, no choices, no freedom.

edited for continuity, they weren't in a canoe.