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The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.

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Allyson - Apr 17, 2006 12:09:30 pm PDT #6169 of 10001

Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Any takers on a beta of a draft or is everyone working on lovely drabbles?

Need to know if it's too dry, meanders off into la la land, the usual. Nothing about it reads correctly to me, but this has been like giving birth to a next of scorpions, so I think I'm too resentful of it to feel it through.

Just looking for general, "This reads well/this doesn't/I don't understand what the hell you're talking about" crit is what I need.

Topic!Cindy - Apr 17, 2006 12:15:53 pm PDT #6170 of 10001

What is even happening?

Allyson, I have about a half hour.

erikaj - Apr 17, 2006 12:16:37 pm PDT #6171 of 10001

Always Anti-fascist!

Ok, Allyson, I could do that. Profile's good.

Allyson - Apr 17, 2006 12:19:10 pm PDT #6172 of 10001

Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Insent with gratitude!

Jesse - Apr 17, 2006 12:19:38 pm PDT #6173 of 10001

Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

I could give it a read, Allyson.

Allyson - Apr 17, 2006 12:22:25 pm PDT #6174 of 10001

Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

hooray! I never get a Jesse beta!

deborah grabien - Apr 17, 2006 12:45:40 pm PDT #6175 of 10001

It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Home from interview - Allyson, send if needed.

deborah grabien - Apr 17, 2006 1:28:32 pm PDT #6176 of 10001

It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Allyson, have it and am editing even as we speak. Should have it for you shortly.

Ailleann - Apr 17, 2006 1:33:21 pm PDT #6177 of 10001

vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

I'd be happy to read too, Allyson, if you're still looking.

deborah grabien - Apr 17, 2006 2:05:19 pm PDT #6178 of 10001

It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

And, backsent. Let me know if you need more.

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