It's not like she blew me off. She just left with another guy, that's all.

Riley ,'Conversations with Dead People'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Typo Boy - Apr 14, 2006 1:31:52 pm PDT #6134 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Sticking with - well not fairy tales, but classic stories...

Patient

People marvel at how calm I stay. But I know you. You would never betray me for someone who would stay loyal to you. When your new queen turns Judas, you'll tearfully repent and go back to me. I’ll smile as though receiving the greatest of all possible rewards. Everyone will hold me up as a model of how the perfect meek woman behaves.

I’m patient, I’ll wait. But some fine spring when you are in the mood, I’ll serve you a fine bowl of watercress, and lettuce, crowned by what you will swear are mushrooms fried in garlic – a wonderful salad, served cold.


deborah grabien - Apr 14, 2006 1:35:04 pm PDT #6135 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, EXCELLENT revenge fantasy!


deborah grabien - Apr 14, 2006 1:40:53 pm PDT #6136 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Future Shock

When I met Marsha, she was thirty. She roller-bladed to relax.

When I met Rosemary, her first novel had just debuted. She dropped the book at the reading, flushed, mumbled, picked it up, dropped it again.

When I met Diane, she'd just been diagnosed. She was a dancer. That was eight years ago.

I look at them, my sisters in illness. All three are progressive. Only one can still walk unassisted.

My neuro tells me mine is relapsing-remitting. But I already see the signs of my own damage. Eight years from now, will I recognise the woman in the mirror?


Atropa - Apr 14, 2006 1:48:41 pm PDT #6137 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

Of course you recognize me. I haven't changed at all.

And, because you see what you expect to see, you'll compliment me on my youthful appearance ("What moisturizer do you use?"). You'll assume I've been working out and watching what I eat. (You'd be right. Except that my definition of watching what I eat is a bit different now.)

And if it occurs to you that you only see me at night, well, that must be because we both have such busy lives.

I haven't changed at all. And I never will again.


erikaj - Apr 14, 2006 1:50:37 pm PDT #6138 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

a lot of variety, this time, not really from me, though


deborah grabien - Apr 14, 2006 1:54:56 pm PDT #6139 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Jilli wrote a vampire drabble! Perfect.


§ ita § - Apr 14, 2006 1:59:36 pm PDT #6140 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I love "we both have such busy lives." And I can't explain why.

****

I am your daughter. Fruit of your loins and the woman you loved so dearly. The woman you see now, in your maddened grief, when you look at me.

I am your daughter. I am clothed in the skin of an ass. Why couldn't you have stopped there? Each dress, more fantastic than the next, surely you wouldn't kill the beast that shat you gold. But you did.

I am your daughter. Married now, tied to a land as mighty as your own, with countless soldiers at my besotted husband's disposal.

I am your daughter. Who do you see now?


Lee - Apr 14, 2006 2:33:56 pm PDT #6141 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

This really is a FABULOUS topic. Kudos to Steph, and all of you.


Jesse - Apr 14, 2006 2:42:17 pm PDT #6142 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

Yeah, these are all fabulous. Today, the topic is making me think of Mary Magdalene by the empty tomb, but god knows I couldn't drabble THAT.


juliana - Apr 14, 2006 2:42:42 pm PDT #6143 of 10001
I’d be lying if I didn’t say that I miss them all tonight…

Um, hi. I seem to have committed drabble today. Not making any claims to decency, but thought I'd share.... I don't have the specific photo I'm referring to online, but this is from the same series.

Blondie

She peers out at the lens sideways, behind sunglasses and a shock of bleached-blond hair, dark at the roots. Steel-grey eyeshadow over sky-blue eyes that see all, red lips curled in a cross between “come-hither” and a smirk. The entire attitude is one of knowledge, of freedom, of fearlessness.

She’s only 4 years younger than I am – I was 26 when that picture was taken. So much has happened since – would she recognize me? Would she like me? There’s been a breakup, a marriage, a fall, a divorce, a move.

I’d like to return to her, see that fearlessness again.